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"you take away my world, I take away yours."

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This story is a sequel to My little Venom: a monster inside


Nearly a year after the black symbiote was locked away, Twilight has managed to forget about the whole thing. But when an old rival returns seeking revenge with the help of a new friend it can only mean trouble. To make things worst they'll need the help of a symbiote.
edited by King of Kings

There will be slight hint to TwiDash

As a alternative to the magic duel episode.
The story continues.

Chapters (6)
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i wouldn't mind a romance. my personal favs are twidash, twijack, or a polygamous relationship of appledashlight.

This definitely needs a proof reader.

cool I m loving this keep adding more chapters to this story and keep me updated:raritystarry::heart:

Twilight said and toke off for the train as fast as her hooves can carry her.

This should be Twilight said and took off for the train as fast as her hooves can carry her.

"On no.nononono,

This should be "Oh no. No, no, no, no,

"Carnage toke her hostage."

This should be "Carnage took her hostage."

Applebloom and Sweete came out along with Spike.

This should be Applebloom and Sweetie came out along with Spike.

"An't nothing hurt but my pride." Applejack said, pushing pinkie off her.

This should be "Ain't nothing hurt but my pride." Applejack said, pushing pinkie off her.

Before Twilight could say anything Carnage knocked her out as well, the last sounds she heard where Scootaloo's cry's for help.

This should be Before Twilight could say anything Carnage knocked her out as well, the last sounds she heard where Scootaloo's cries for help.

"How disappointing." Carnage grumbled to her self, she turn to see three frightened fillies and a baby dragon. She smirked and walked toward them.

This should be "How disappointing." Carnage grumbled to herself, she turn to see three frightened fillies and a baby dragon. She smirked and walked toward them.

They all then saw Rainbow go flying over them and hit the ground not to far away. Twilight then said"Fluttershy take the fillies and spike to a safe place now." Fluttershy nodded and escorted them.

This should be They all then saw Rainbow go flying over them and hit the ground not too far away. Twilight then said “Fluttershy take the fillies and spike to a safe place now." Fluttershy nodded and escorted them.

Twilight couldn't help but giggle at Scootaloo's worry for her. It seems she showed the same worry as if she where already Twilight's daughter, except she was acting like Spike,even he got worried from time to time about Twilight.

This should be Twilight couldn't help but giggle at Scootaloo's worry for her. It seems she showed the same worry as if she were already Twilight's daughter, except she was acting like Spike, even he got worried from time to time about Twilight.

"I don't know, I'll get back to You on that." Twilight said trying to get up only to be tackled by orange/purple blur.

This should be "I don't know, I'll get back to you on that." Twilight said trying to get up only to be tackled by orange/purple blur.

The figure had two white, deadly eyes, a devilish smile that would give her nightmares for weeks, it's color was blood red, with what looks like black veins.

This should be The figure had two white, deadly eyes, a devilish smile that would give her nightmares for weeks, its color was blood red, with what looks like black veins.

Then she heard a voice she knows very will.

This should be Then she heard a voice she knows very well.

Twilight tightened her grip on her drink after the comment. "if I chose to adopt her, what will she think of me, I mean I've raised Spike seance he was hatched."

This should be Twilight tightened her grip on her drink after the comment. "if I chose to adopt her, what will she think of me, I mean I've raised Spike since he was hatched."

"So what are you planing on doing Twilight...if you don't mind me asking?" Fluttershy asked.

This should be "So what are you planning on doing Twilight...if you don't mind me asking?" Fluttershy asked.

"Yes." Rarity said drooling lituerally.

This should be "Yes." Rarity said literally drooling. (On a personal note, sure because that isn’t creepy whatsoever, but that is probably what you were going for, now that I think about it.)

"Will what? Oh is this a game, I love games let me guess...ummmmmmmm OH is it there making a remake of jurassic park?" Pinkie asked

This should be "Will what? Oh is this a game, I love games let me guess...ummmmmmmm OH is it they’re making a remake of Jurassic Park?" Pinkie asked

"so whats this about sugarcube?" Applejack asked.

This should be "So what’s this about sugarcube?" Applejack asked.

"yes darling i was wondering the same thing." Rarity said looking at Twilight with a mix of concern and confusion.

This should be "Yes darling I was wondering the same thing." Rarity said looking at Twilight with a mix of concern and confusion.

after last night's events Twilight gathered her friends( and the rest of the crusaders. ) for a private talk.all her friends wondered why Scootaloo was there sleeping in Twilight's extra bed.

This should be After last night's events Twilight gathered her friends (and the rest of the crusaders,) for a private talk. All her friends wondered why Scootaloo was there sleeping in Twilight's extra bed.

"Will everypony I found out something about Scootaloo, something that may change everything." Twilight stated as spike came out with drinks.

This should be "Well everypony, I found out something about Scootaloo, something that may change everything." Twilight stated as Spike came out with drinks.

"Then come out and say darling." Rarity said leaning up in excitement.

This should be "Then come out and say it darling." Rarity said leaning up in excitement.

"Yay that what I thought at first" Twilight said.

This should be "Yeah that’s what I thought at first" Twilight said.

"Witch you've done will by the way." Spike added.

This should be "Which you've done well by the way." Spike added.

"Where behind you one hundred percent Twilight." Fluttershy said in her caring tone. Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie, Spike all nodded in agreement. Except for Rainbow who grumbled to her self.

This should be "We’re behind you one hundred percent Twilight." Fluttershy said in her caring tone. Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie, Spike all nodded in agreement. Except for Rainbow who grumbled to herself.

What in tarnasion just happened! Applejack yelled. While everyone else just wide eyed.

This should be What in tarnasion just happened! Applejack yelled. While everyone else just stared, wide eyed.

Not too long away a set of eyes was still watching every thing that had just happened

This should be Not too long away a set of eyes was still watching everything that had just happened

Scootaloo first hesitated but know that it was right for Twilight's friends to know at lest. So she nodded.

This should be Scootaloo first hesitated but know that it was right for Twilight's friends to know at least. So she nodded.

"Of course, what are friends for. I'll get the girls later to talk about this." Twilight said

This should be "Of course, what are friends for? I'll get the girls later to talk about this." Twilight said

There...there.Died. Was all scootaloo could say before she ran to Twilight and cried into her chest fur.

This should be “They’re...they’re dead.” Was all Scootaloo could say before she ran to Twilight and cried into her chest fur.

Twilight just stood there almost as if she had a heart-attack, it was like the world just froze the second scootaloo said that last word. She would have been like that forever it scootaloo had not snapped her back to realty.

This should be Twilight just stood there almost as if she had a heart-attack, it was like the world just froze the second Scootaloo said that last word. She would have been like that forever it Scootaloo had not snapped her back to reality.

"Wiiiillll I may be an orphan."

This should be "Weeeellll I may be an orphan."

"Will..um..have you ever wondered why no one has ever seen my parents?" Gaining a nod from Twilight.

This should be "Well..um..have you ever wondered why no one has ever seen my parents?" Gaining a nod from Twilight.

"Alright Scootaloo calm down, what has you this worked up? And why this early in the mourning?" Twilight asked as she let out a yawn.

This should be "Alright Scootaloo calm down, what has you this worked up? And why this early in the morning?" Twilight asked as she let out a yawn.

"Scootaloo? What brings you here." Was all Twilight had to say when the little filly tackled her.

This should be "Scootaloo? What brings you here?" Was all Twilight had to say when the little filly tackled her.

"NO!" she said as she shot up from her sleep breathing heavily.when she heard a somepony at her door.

This should be "NO!" she said as she shot up from her sleep breathing heavily. When she heard a somepony at her door.

"You can not escape the coming death for soon every thing you hold dear will soon burn in flames" was what it said when she heard the screams of her friends and a filly.

This should be "You cannot escape the coming death for soon everything you hold dear will burn in flames" was what it said when she heard the screams of her friends and a filly.

the crush is dash. i'm calling it.

about time u made the third chapter of this story hope the other chapters r updated a lot faster than the third chapter did

Okay I'm loving where this going and all..... but please do NOT let Trixie take over the symbiote. If this is the first appearance then that means CARNAGE is in control because.... that suit is f***ing insane.

when is a next chapter going to be?

6776062 I've unfortunately had my mind on other things for the past few months with work and all. So I can't say this year, maybe but don't hold your breath on it. Latest for say would be sometime in January.

6776346 ok let everybody known when chapter 5 is ready ok.

hi, here is an Email I sent to you today Regarding My little Venom 4 and the Replacement story for Transformers: Secret of the Mane Six: http://www.fimfiction.net/manage_user/messages/8389822
with thanks and hopes up,
From your biggest fan of all time ever,
Shane W.L. Nokes aka James S.K. Plasma

OH DAMN. Well. On the bright side. At least this isn't gonna be Planet of the Symbiotes..... r-right?

hope there is a sequel to this

6951313 Or Maybe the Wolves will return to howl. THE NORTH REMEMBERS! >:). and the Starks will have their REVENGE ON THE LOT OF YOU.

Will there be a "My Little Venom: Anti-Venom" Story?

7134541 uh *runs to computer and moves files* damn it they're onto me.:twilightoops:

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Comment posted by James-Plasma deleted Apr 23rd, 2016

Carnage calls him self as "I" instead of "we"

Comment posted by mechgamer deleted Apr 12th, 2019

"Oh a Volcanic area is all ways the best place to have final battles, even when your apprentice turned and became evil only to get two legs and an arm cut off and put in a suit to keep you alive and makes you sound so silly like this." Pinkie then covers her mouth and makes this wierd breathing sound.

Pinkie your references never get old.

"Good, we will soon rise up from the ashes of the old world and bring forth a new one, cut one head off and two more will take it's place. HAIL HYDRA!"

Hail HYDRA!

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