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Why thank you, kind sir. I'm glad you're liking the story too. As far as I'm concerned, the sex is a part of their story, but it's not the entire point; I like for it to explore who they are and how they feel for one another. It's a high-intensity scene, much like a battle, and like a fight, it can help bring out a character's true colors, I think. As with any form of characterization, it deserves to be done well, and that quality is something for which I strive.

Good job on this. It was really confusing reading the 'he' or 'she', 'him' or 'her' right after the switch, but I got used to it. Regardless, I enjoyed the story!

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Thanks! And guess what—the direct sequel comes out today! I'll be putting it up once more people are online, and I hope you check that out too!