Very, very well done.

Well, well, congratulations sir! Nothing better than a Octascratch Romance/Clop fic I go to stalk (just kidding) follow you! Also...
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Thanks, man, I tried my best.

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Woohoo! 'Tis my favorite ship. Thanks.

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You did a very good job!

As soon. As I saw tentacles, let's just say I seen enough Hentai to know where this was going.

I demand more

Let`s vedere che cosa questo ha da offrire...

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Well, I do plan on eventually writing a sequel about Vinyl's birthday present. It's gonna be quite a bit different, though.

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Ha! 60's Spiderman for the win!

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I've read clop before, but I can only stand it in a tastefully written small dose. If you've read The Only Thing Better Than Flying, it's a perfect example of the kind of clop that I can read.

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Ah, I see. Yeah, not really gonna find that here. I mean, I made an effort not to be crude or cheesy, but this whole story started as an excuse to see if I could write clop at all, so it's certainly not going to qualify. Oh well. That's why I put in the option to skip it.

Pretty well done. Can't wait to see the flip side of this story.

Pretty darn good story my friend, here's my greenthumb and a follow!

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Thanks! I'll try not to disappoint.

I...I...I'm..gonna....go...now.... not enough brain bleach... In the WORLD for this....

hmmm, i like it
is really cute and sweet

...dayum son

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Not jacked so much as someone wrote a story that was coincidentally quite similar to something I had in mind for a sequel to this one. I never told anyone about my plans other than the basic "Vinyl's birthday" concept, so it's not like they stole my idea or anything.

Very well done! It's weird, something this gentle is kind of a change of pace for me, since I usually read lots of sick, filthy fetish clop. It's nice to read something more gentle for a change!

P. S, totally looking forward to seeing what Vinyl's present is :3

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Thank you. Yeah, sometimes it's nice to change things up a bit.

It was not disappointing I must say, a nice blend of sweet romance and sweaty sex.

It was great fav and 5/5
you sir earned my first comment of the new year XD congradulations and happy new year

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Thanks a lot. Happy new year to you as well.

"It's.... It feels bizarre, like an alien or something."

Well, at least it's not a facehugger xD

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I knew it was dirty out of context, but I only just realized how dirty it sounds. And yup, I like my TaviScratch with some loving romance, even if it neatly covers up the, uh, questionable incoming gift.

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Well, at least it's not a facehugger xD

Oh geeze, this Tavi would totally flip out at one of those.

"I don't want some thing inside my mouth."

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Yeah. Not to mention that a newborn xenomorph contains some of its host's DNA. This alien would be pretty posh...

Btw, I now thought that Vinyl must really love Octavia, with rimming and stuff (because nothing says "love" more than sticking a tongue in there...)

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Now I can't help but see a xenomorph lounging on a couch and speaking with a British accent.

Indeed. I really wanted to drive home just how close these two are, how bad Vinyl felt for pushing past Tavi's boundaries like she did, and how much she was willing to make it up to the mare she loves. I love portraying these two as having a really strong bond, and a more playful and less vitriolic relationship than I usually see, though most probably like the ship because of the usual tropes. A ship is only as cracked as the author makes it.

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Now I can't help but see a xenomorph lounging on a couch and speaking with a British accent.

Now you totally got to do a story about this.

What I like most about this story and it's sequel is the simple fact that their sex isn't 'perfect'. They actually have to talk about things. They have to stop, they get carried away, they make mistakes. But they also talk about, laugh it off, comfort each other - it's just... wonderful.
You're right. It's not so much about the erotic part as it is about trust. And I greatly enjoyed that shift of focus.

Thank you.

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I look at the clopfics around here, and almost all I see is idealized, unrealistic sex, like straight-up porn. There's nothing wrong with porn fics, I just wanted to make something more true to life, like things a real pair of lovers might do if we just happened to be watching them. Thank you kindly, and I'm glad you like it.

Wow, really enjoyed reading the interaction between vinyl and Octavia, they care for each other and they communicated about what was and wasn't working and its lovely.
10/10