This is the furthest I go. Well done, though! I do have one comment.

"I thought you didn't like bananas

Dude.

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Thanks. I wondered if anyone would stop here. I figured I'd give them the option, since not everyone is into the explicit stuff. Glad you liked it.

it's always sweet to see a couple out for a good date. too bad this chapter wasn't a bit longer.

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Yeah, I kinda feel it's a bit short as well. I kinda had a bit of trouble thinking up things for them to do and talk about that wouldn't feel odd or redundant.

this story. I have seen it somewhere before. wait. arnt oyu the guy who had his story jacked by someone else

She made a quick twirl around the shaft, coming to rest one foreleg and one hind leg held out.

That sounds kinda dirty out of context... Also, I like how romantic are first chapters of those stories. Nothing implies tentacles...