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it's not bad, especially for a first clop fic! everything was pretty well described, and there werent any glaring plot holes or inconsistencies...but i do think you might want to do a little more research into female anatomy...hymens arent supposed to 'shred' or break during sex, and if you hurt yourself enough to bleed during your first time then both of you are Doing It Wrong. i recommend reading http://drallisonhopkinsphd.wordpress.com/2012/01/03/sex-myth-exposed-what-they-dont-teach-you-about-your-hymen/ or http://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/all-about-sex/201103/the-hymen-membrane-widely-misunderstood, both two highly creditable sources from reputable professionals. and it might even make your fic even sexier, now that you know discord doesnt actually have to hurt fluttershy in order to make love to her!
also, half the point you want the girl on top during your first time together is so that she can take control and take in his cock as fast or as slow as she feels comfortable with...discord pulling her down all at once kind of defeats the purpose and causes her unnecessary discomfort. besides, its not like they need to rush! they have all the time in the world to explore one another's body. and slow gentle exploration makes for a longer story, which means more smut for us readers to enjoy
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Thanks. I will have to keep that in mind for later stories. Or if I decide to edit, since there are some minor spelling errors.
I'm not sure longer is a great thing though, since I suck at describing action.
Hey! A bestiality tale of sex! I KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH THIS! I'll show this to the dungeons and dragons kids and tell them that it's FUN! I can see from the first comment already that there is DEEP MIND BREAKING CONTENT in inter course of a female pony and a giant donkey dragon!
THERES NOTHING WRONG WITH THAT AT ALL!
Wow, I thought I had sick fetishes. I don't think I'm gonna read this, but I know who will!
Wow, thank you to all those that have favorited! I hope some of you comment, because I always like to know what I can do better. Especially since action isn't my strong suit, and I do consider smut to be a form of action.
But if not, I don't mind. I love you all!
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Is that I good dang?
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YAY!
Well done, both characters are portages in their respective personalities there was a good balance of buildup and conclusion, and I really like this ship. I hope you'll do more stuff like this in the future, not this exactly but perhaps something like it.
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Thank you. I might. I do have a little obsession with them. I'm a sucker for B&TB/POTO style stories. Hell, my other story basically went from a Luna/self-insert ship fic to a Fluttercord fic because they were that insistent about it. As soon as I came up with Strife, my other OC (Discord's brother in that fic), they went, "Your self-insert sucks. This is going to be about us two and Strife from now on!"
So in short: I love this pairing and probably will do more with it at some point.
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I don't think Discord's ever been put into a position where he's had to feel guilt before. Even in Keep Calm and Flutter On, that wasn't really guilt but fear of abandonment. So I think for him, living for thousands of years without actually understanding this emotion, it would hit him like a freight train straight through the heart. He'd feel it much more acutely than you or I because all his long life, all he's ever done is felt completely in the right about everything (or else felt total apathy towards it),
4393084 Very nice. Follow up question, what's B&TB/POTO?
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Beauty and the Beast/Phantom of the Opera
great story and great clop
though i am dieing to see what games they come up with >:3
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Well this is meant to be a one and done, but maybe someday I'll show some of the game in a separate fic.
After all, on my Fallout Equestria Fluttershy blog, I've had one of her new friends blurt out that she dreams about Discord tying her up and tickling her with a feather duster.
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WAit what blog!? XD
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http://falloutequestriafluttershy.tumblr.com/
Yeah, I have an ask blog for Fluttershy set in the Fallout: Equestria universe. To be precise, in the space between the epilogue and the afterward. To be even more precise, it's set in sink with the Ask Ditzy Ghoul blog, so about 2 years after Sunshine and Rainbows (for those that don't know, Ask Ditzy Ghoul is the blog by the author of The Ditzy Doo Chronicles).
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lol nice
ill look though it sometime X3
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Well then...I suppose this is the reason for these two having weekly "tea parties"...
Which, by the way, would be a great story for you to try. For this being your first clopfic, you sure did well. You've earned a follower.
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Thanks. I'm debating doing something like this for the episode with Tree Hugger, but I'm scared of redundancy.
6027953 Redundancy...?
If it's a good story, I'd like to see it. I'm always up for a good FlutterClopfic. Its also nice to see Flutters getting some lovin' without it being rape...
I like your writing style, is the point. I say go for it.
This story is good, but why does it have a Tragedy tag?
Buen clop, realmente no soy fan del sexo oral y menos en la primera vez, sin embargo me gustó mucho el final. Para ser tu primer clopfic, lo hiciste muy bien, felicidades