Entropy

Entropy.
The ultimate form of chaos.
The one type of chaos Discord hates.

It has claimed her.

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Comment posted by D Historian deleted Sep 11th, 2016

ponybird21

ponybird21 #3 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · ·

So.... summery please. How she die?

D Historian

D Historian #4 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · ·

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Oh, uh, some sort of Attack. It doesn't really matter tho, just that the immortality magic failed, and she ded.

kurusagi16

kurusagi16 #5 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · ·

AW! Poor Discord, but, what exactly was Fluttershy dying from? It seemed that she looked healthy and wasn't old, so was it weird illness? All in all, it was a good story, and the beginning part was told beautifully!

Totally Not Good

Totally Not Good #6 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · ·

7555439 The immortality died.

D Historian

D Historian #7 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · ·

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I did not put detail into HOW, the concept of the story was what Discord feels about it. So...uh...she ded

DonutForest

DonutForest #8 · Sep 11th, 2016 · 1 · ·

That is sad but Discord Celestia and Luna... have to get used to experience this kind of horror over and over again. Perfect subject for a sad story well done.

Manly Man

Manly Man #9 · Sep 11th, 2016 · · ·

7556088 The thing is, this is the first time that Discord had loved anyone but himself, over the countless years of his existence. That level of despair, something he'd never felt before, would burn his heart to an ashen husk with a pain so severe. It's similar to how the Auditors of Reality, from Discworld, work. They've existed for billions of years, their minds knowing almost everything, but not actually experiencing it; it's to the point that when there are ones who take human forms in Thief of Time, eating a plain soda cracker makes them go unconscious from the sensation, and eating chocolate kills them outright. We don't know if Discord's been around for quite that long, but still, this is his first experience with heartbreak. The devastation would probably make him even crazier than he already is.

Alex Warlorn

Alex Warlorn #10 · Sep 12th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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And this is why Twilight needs to get on getting her friends to ascend to godhood too, and why I think Celestia hopes to one day have Alicornhood be the norm.

Julian the Dreamer