When Scootaloo needed to stay with Thunderlane and Rumble beacause RainbowDash had to save the world once again.
They noticed they might have special feeling for eachother.
now i don't have great english skills iam 14 and im from holland.
so dont acspect my english to be great.
Iam also being tested on dislexia just so you know and enjoy the fic.
Also i have Asperger syndrome i find it kinda hard to discribe feelings.
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I'm sorry, but I can't enjoy this. I recommend finding an editor and proofreader to help you.
4358538 I'm just 14 iam dutch and not great at english.
if you don't enjoy then go read something else.
4358560
Telling someone to go read something else cause you don't like what they say is going to make you look bad. This where you'll find some editors don't think of this as an attack. I'm only trying to help you.
4358584 I understand it now but i think when i'm sorta more done with this fic i wil look in to that a bit more detailed thanks.
Grammar errors, but pretty good.
4359126 I know i should probably work on my grammar a bit more and Thanks.
I think that it's cool your writing a story in English and you are in holland
Don't sweat it about dyslexia I have it as well and I also have dyscalculus and dysgraphia so your not the only one!
4359356 You're Welcome
Let's hope Rumble doesn't run into his foalsitters.
4359555 Thanks man!
4361952 no problem
Question: where does soarin come into this
4371314 the story is not finished yed.
4371627 oh yeah...
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(blonde moment
4371832
at least derpy is blonde.
btw. i realy like your profile pic its great and i think i have seen it somewhare before.
4372433 thanks but it's not my own
I like the way this is going just try to get an editor.Oh and use should instead of shall
4373779 That does'nt mean i haave not seen it before
?
4589654 i will get an editor when i have finished the story and thanks
Hay man I have mild dyslexia and Aspergers as well I can totally see where you're coming from
Good for the first chapter a bit hard to read but still I like it
5466532 I actually plan on rewriting the story but i'm not sure when :)
Just to say, before I read the actual chapter.
I want to say, you are an inspiration! You have certain things holding you back, but you don't let them get to you! You are a huge inspiration, and i can tell you're a fighter. I can tell. Good luck in the future, and have a Nonsesical, Paradoxical and Extraordinary day!
-Pinkie13Pie
It's a great start! Also, to help with the grammar hiccups, you can ask for someone to proofread. Everyone on here is super nice and I'm sure some would like to lend a hoof in helping! :) Check some of the communities for people. Just ask nicely and they will help you!
I'm sorry that you have dyslexia
if it helps, I have ADHD and this made me feel better about it, also, cake 
Your grammar has improved! Also, the d'awws in this chapter is over 9000. So have a derpy
. She just knocked down a lamp. Good luck. (I love this story btw)
Well come to the club https://www.fimfiction.net/group/210834/autisteaspergerautistic-poniesbronies
7256650 same here.
Hi there. I have similar difficulties to you. Whilst I will admit that this isn't the easiest of stories to read at times, i'ts the fact that you have clearly tried and done the best you can that counts. May many more years of writing be ahead of you.
Not only do you write a very sweet story, you deal with the metaphysical as well, namely the fabled transmiton and the transmision of Sweet Apple Acres. I salute you for such intellectual depth. A good day to you.