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TheMichiganDogman


Bacon? Shut up and take my money.

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Rainbow Dash has been suffering from strange nightmares for the past week, that have been keeping her up all night. She decides to wake herself up with a quick morning flight...


This is a fan-made story for the Silent Ponyville series. It isn't canon, but it IS meant to fit into the canon.

Cover art by Naar Puni

Proofread by Legioner8


Currently in the midst of a massive rewrite, because the old chapters were nearly a year and a half old and I was very unsatisfied with them. Just like the LAST big rewrite. Except hopefully not completely terrible this time.

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hmmm got me interested now lets see where this goes

5365064 Prologue's been rewritten slightly if you want to check it out.

She hadn't told any of her friends about it for fear worrying them

of worrying them?

She didn't want to see a doctor either, as there were very few in Ponyville, and each one could easily tell one of her friends...

So they've never head of doctor-patient confidentiality?

For Celestias sake, they weren't even real!

Her friends weren't real? Also "Celestia's"

"Thank celestia yer still alive.

Celestia

Other than that, not bad. The language quality is actually higher than the original SP. (I remember SP wasn't exactly a smooth read - it was the mood that carried the story. Now let's see how well you'll do with that.)

5422090 I actually wrote this a long time ago, when I was more shit at writing.

I'm planning on coming back and remastering it.

Wow, so alright... Been forever since I've been on this site. Decided to rewrite an old story of mine because I feel like I can almost do it justice this time.

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To the two of you who were basically my only fans, I've rewritten this story after over a year. I'm a little proud of how much better this is compared to the old story.

7273090 So, it's just a prologue now and new chapter will follow?

7273322 Yes. It's a second rewrite of the prologue. I'm working on the first chapter right now.

The first draft was "I don't know how I got here" if I remember correctly? This one takes a different approach

7281486 Sort of, but you're thinking of the first chapter rather than the original prologue I believe.

Comment posted by TheMichiganDogman deleted Mar 29th, 2017

I honestly want to come back to this story, at some point. But I'm not a huge brony anymore. I don't think I ever was, to be honest. Just a huge horror and Silent Hill nerd who wanted to make a tribute to an old crossover.

I'm not big on the brony fanbase at this point, but I can't stand leaving projects unfinished... I want to finish this, I just have no clue what to write. Just a rough idea of what Rainbow Dash's personality is supposed to be from memory, and what I can glean from reading the source material, the original fics.

This might be left behind and forgotten once more, but I at least want to give it one last solid attempt before I just up and quit.

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