When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Oh dear. Things are gonna get real bad, ain't they?
What was the point of this chapter i dont understand whats going on.
Will things ever be fixed?
Doesn't seem like it.
I love how in some stories, we all act like the Ponies are incredibly racist (which might be true) and in the worst ones on the sight, they're all as friendly as they are in the show.
Maybe I'm just an @$$h0L3 for thinking that, but whatever.
Amazing work as always! Look forward to more!
Interesting.....
~8chill
Well, at least Jason isn't dead. The story can go on, with the extra spice of him being in the exact same place he sent Rainbow Dash to.
Fluttershy's reacting as expected, Spike is the being (not so) surprisingly stable cornerstone, while Twilight sunk completely into the mud ditch. I still don't get the papercuts on her face, or the ink splatters, but I feel that's gonna be explained later on.
All in all, this is shaping up to be a deliciously intense rest of day.
5262289 Set-up. Jason's trying (and failing) to pull together his sense of self, Fluttershy is showing off her guilt, and Jason is now in the same room as Rainbow. Spike reconnects with Twilight, who had had some time to think. And wreck the shit outta the library.
Rainbow Dash is screwed when he wakes up.
5262288 Indeed.
Looks like Spike has to do everything. Useless ponies
SlenderMare would've loved this chapter.
5262289 Fluttershy gave Jason some sedatives , but in a dosage much too large for him, which sent him into cardiac arrest.
If he's going to be a discount Jeff the Killer, then ohohoho boy!
I will. Reign. Down. Hell.
Period.
Looks like it's up to Spike try to pull everything back together. Again.
I can't think of anything better to say other than the title of the story; It never really ends.
I feel sorry for both the guy and Spike.
5262399 You misspelled "be deathly afraid of him". I think you missed the chapter where he almost killed her.
Well, there goes the neighborhood
5262391 You'll just have to wait and see. But I promise not to disappoint.
Everything I have is on the table. Communications have failed, the enemy is on their doorstep, and their deus ex machina ray has been taken out.
It's time for the last stand.
This story has become so edgy that my eyes were bleeding by the time I finished reading. You gave my cancer cancer.
I can only follow your downward spiral for so long. First half was really good, but now... not so much.
Best of luck, though.
5262468 You've just regained my undivided attention. Well played Vladimir, well played.
Wow, keep this up and you'll probly finish the story before the weekend. Anyway, shits hitting the fan with Rainbow and Jason in the same room and Jason for the eleventh time in a Coma.
5261121 It's alright.
Fyi. The only way for someone to be classified as a dick in my book is to be just as bad or worse than Joffrey Lannister or Justin Beiber to other people, and that is something neigh impossible to be. So you responding somewhat jokishly, as one should to people pestering you, is nothing really.
Love the story so far and I can't wait to see what more dark themes, twists and moods you have in your reportoage ready to be unleashed at the minds of us unsuspecting readers. :3
5262295
Well, look at the title of the story.
Hollywood undead............................. I so love you right now.
5262399
she cant, shes incapacitated.
5262399 How? Beat him with her respirator?
5262660 Yes!
why not? I want to see (read) that
You'd better not turn this into some kind of Jeff the killer bullshit Other then a few concerns im liking this a bunch take care friend
5262347 Sign me up!
I can't wait to see what Jason is going to be like when he wakes up...
5262704 His descent into madness did inspire Jason's. But Jason isn't going to go axe-crazy like Jeff did.
Jason lasted this long without turning into a homicidal maniac. Even with Discord's "help", Jason isn't a monster.
Regardless of what he is led to think.
5262719 Not happy, to say the least.
OH boy...This is gonna bee good.
I don't know what happen next...
Look, I get Celestia won't publicaly punish the whole mane six, but what about Luna? She seems to have that hardcore white vs black justice vibe. Pretty sure she'd couldn't care less if they represented harmony and all that jazz.
Holy shit... Jason is really having a horrible life, you could almost say... It never really ends heh heh
I can't wait to see Jason's reaction to almost being killed by Fluttershy when he wakes up.
I really love this story keep up the great work!
5262723 Neat well thanks for clarifying for me either way your doing a fantastic job!
We are but products of our environment. The ponies were monsters to him so he is now at the crossroad of becoming one.
More I need mo....SQUIRREL! Danm squirrels!
I need more I must find out what happens next! *puts authors brain on overdrive*
Okay SOMETHING has to be done here. Flutter's pretty much nearly killed him...it's time my friend.
Luna my wonderful mare. Be a dear and take the stage! Your sister is sadly lacking in morality this year
I kinda want Jason to pull out Rainbow's breathing tube, or pinch the line shut, before he gives her her 'why you suck' speech. Most of his tormentors have been just ignorant, but she's been sadistic, and proud of it.
In Shakespearean plays, or story structures inspired by Shakespeare, the penultimate fourth act is known as The Spiral. It can be characterized by a slippery-slope-style rise in complexity, uncertainty and chaos, AKA a 'downward spiral', and usually ends on the story climax. The Spiral is also usually (and should always be) the shortest act in the story. You may notice that this fourth act is similar in character to the fabled middle act of the three-act structure, or 'rising action', which is always the longest act. The popularity and systemic misuse of the three-act structure may explain why so many stories (movies, fanfictions, what have you) seem to have no idea what to do in the middle, and seem to go on for-fucking-ever.
Well lets see. Each of the mane six he talks to makes things worse for him. Can't wait to see how Rainbow Dash nearly kills Jason.
wright more bro so fucking awesome need more
5262974 Pfft, that's sooo three years ago.
You know I was wondering why this story was loved, until I read it myself and understand why. Wonderful job.
The shit is going to hit the fan so hard next chapter!
And here I was, wondering why I have four unread chapters while I can't see any stories when I click the link. And what do I find? A story I've favorited has been reassigned as 'Mature' leading to it being invisible for me as I don't have the 'Show Mature' setting on. Welp, at least I found it now and know that invisible unread chapters isn't a bug.
So he's going to snap now, right? Sounds like when he wakes up he's going to start chewing on Rainbow's face.
AMNESIA! calling it now! taking all bets!
Fluttershy really should have known. You don't just give an animal a dosage of anything because it looks KINDA like another animal.
I believe Luna needs to do what Celestia would never do.... turn them in to pariahs to truly feel what he has felt, because the the only thing that will give him closure is the destruction of their dreams, basically make it so that they can never be what they wanted most.
I hope he wakes up next to Rainbow Dash, pulls the curtain aside and see's her and they strangle each other to death like Londo and G'kar.
Fun part is how they are beginning to see what monsters they all have been in there own ways. Except Rarity, she probably hasn't really noticed-going to Canterlot was probably a chance to go shopping for her.