When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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wow i didnt think you would be so literal with the whole watching while you sleep for science thing...., anyways great chapter as usual
really. FUCK YOU TWIBRIGHT.
Is it bad that I look at this as a comedy chapter?
5271033 It's probably the best day he's had in Equestria so far. The worst thing that happened is the Gossip Center of Ponyville thinks he's a crossdresser.
Maybe he will watch you in your sleep.
SEE HOW YOU LIKE IT.
Oh man, loving this story more every chapter. Jason's "Fuck-it-all" attitude and Twi's adorkable self. Makes for good fun.
KILTS!
NOT A FUCKING SKIRT! OTHERWISE I'll MAKE HAGGIS OUT OF YA!
You know i liked the idea of him getting retribution on the mane 6 but now its like those 3 years didnt happen, what happened to being mad at them? what happened to being mad at celestia for not punishing them?
No Pants would make me go crazy in a few weeks.
But forget coffee lad, Kilts'll wake you up on a cold morning!
1. Either that cloak is channeling a very potent form of Discord, or Jason is really losing it... and I'm leaning strongly towards the second.
2. I have absolutely no issue with Jason starting to punch people in the face right now, the guy has been through enough.
Why is he suddenly just going along with Twilight? Did he just stop being angry?
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He probably just stopped caring.
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yeah, what these two said. three years of suffering from the mane six, especially from the one who started all of this, that almost lead to death by suicide don't just go away you know?
5271076 He doesn't give a fuck. He thinks he's going to Zebraland, and he's having violent moodswings.
...so, the tone shifted wildly again, and I can't seem to find the reason why. Again.
God damn it twilight snarkle
5271091 Okay:
1. he just wants to forget about it. Three years of being angry didn't do shit.
2. He's unstable. His moodswings are getting worse, and he was having a manic-episode.
3. The ponies he's been wanting to be accepted by are starting to mind him a bit less.
4. On one hand, the mare who got the murder-ball rolling is trying to get all buddy-buddy. On the other hand, Twilight Motherfucking Sparkle is actually being nice.
5. He's started casually mentioning destroying Equestria as if he was talking about the weather. Assume nothing.
there are two better options I can think of they both involve leaving ponyvile one: go to the minotaurs learn to be a blacksmith. two: go to griffons learn to hunt.
5271103 The tone of the story follows Jason's mood. The more unstable he gets, the worse his moodswings get. When the narrator of the story is insane, the story reflects that.
So, let's see what this dude has going for him so far.
In Equestria
Everypony but the two main princess' hates him (Kinda? Maybe? Not sure at this point)
Tried and failed to kill himself
Everypony hates him for that while simultaneously feeling sorry for him
Suddenly, cancer.
Something possessing him through his enchanted cloak
Did I miss anything?
What... what is going on. Did the past several years never happen or something?
That's it. SOMEBODY GET ME A SHOTGUN, I GOT A HORSE TO PUT DOWN.
Short chapter is short
Sad duck is sad
Twilight needs to get shot. Why did he not bring any firearms with him?
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He's not exactly over it all. He'll just rain down Hellfire with a smile.
Vlad tell us your secrets! When will more of these good chapters come out!?
I think this is nearly the first time I saw an HiE where the human in question was aggressively silly and I didn't go "Nope" and close it. Thank goodness for context.
5271145 Not just Jason's attitude, but Twilight's as well. Just one chapter previous, Twilight was saying that Jason would be better off dead, but now she's helping him?
And what about being "Discordified?" There was a big buildup to Jason finally losing it right before being poisoned, but he seems to be back to normal now.
The chapter title could sum up this entire story... Dammit Twilight!
5271188 She said it would be a mercy for him if he didn't wake up. But he did.
Spike knocked some sense into her and taught her some empathy. Twilight's taking steps to deconstruct her fear of him.
And normal? Nope. Jason may be coherent again, but he's nowhere near normal. It'll become more obvious later, but the changes are already clear if you care to look.
5271201 yeah that whole burning the country to the ground thing was a bit of a red flag.
I would find it really interesting to see Jason's reactions to another human thrown Into Equestria. Or possibly discord taking form of a human, Jason would probably die of pure joy.
Kilts are not skirts, Twilight. They are the manskirts, probably the manliest skirt in existence.
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When the fuck will this story start making some semblance of sense?
The ponies at first didn't let him die, and now Twilight is all about letting him die. You are dragging this story out as if it's on life support. I keep reading the chapters to see if there is going to be some progress, some modicum of GROWTH. I have seen none.
5271056 Know why we call it a kilt?
My neighbor called it a skirt. So I kilt him.
It's a kilt son!
You do nae know anythan aboot Scotland!
They be thae mightiest and proudest warriors of all.
You should be proud to wear one of those! Oh and bagpipes, play them while riding a unicycle and you will win. Everything.
Sparklebutt the chaperone... alright. She's still an asshole and I want to see her with a broken horn. Raribitch as well. If Jason's indeed gonna burn Equestria down, he's got to start by these two's houses. It's not like Spike, the only character worth shit in this fic, isn't fireproof.
To prove my point, here's this:
She's gonna push him right to the edge exactly as she did before, except this time it's gonna blow her way. And BADLY.
5271312 Seems legit. Seems those three years have damaged his memory.
5271319 If you don't like the story, why do you keep reading?
If it doesn't make sense and you don't get anything from it, why do you keep reading?
You've stuck around until near the end of the story...why do you keep reading?
It's not for everyone. Not everyone's going to get it, and of those that do, even fewer are going to like it. That's fine, if it's not something you're into I have no problem with that. Everyone has their own taste in literature.
But why make yourself miserable reading bad fanfiction? There's a fuck-ton of stories on this site that are way better than this one.
5271340 You know man? I liked you since the beginning. I still like you. You get it.
Stay awesome, bro.
5271360 Aw, thanks! You're rad as hell yourself, man I mean seriously, you're damn intelligent, you write really fucking well, and you can draw nicely to boot.
5271148 Forced to live three years out in the wilderness with people refusing any kind of contact except maybe fruit thrown at him.
One pony tortured him for fun (Goddamn it, Dash!)
Blind in one eye after his "best pony" bucked him in the face.
Mindraped atleast once.
5271378 Oh yeah. Those too.
5271375 I'm glad you like my work. I still have a long way to go until I'll consider myself good as a writer, but that's why I do fanfiction. You all have to deal with me trying to figure out what the Hell I'm doing.
...Or alternatively he could entirely run out of all fucks and shits to give and reach a strange state of nirvana, before going bugnuts crazy in the way that won't kill everyone.
'Cause that can happen too.
Hrmmm..interesting watching a man falling into himself. It's an odd process to behold. It seems unlikely to happen, yet madness marches to the beat of its own kazoo.
5271387 There are three ways Jason can go from this: Michael Myers, The Joker, or Rorschach. Rorschach is the best for Equestria, because he'll just lose any and all faith, sulk around at night, and ramble on about gutters and blood until he dies. Mikey would just be boring. The Joker would be a little overdramatic.
So I'll make up a fourth choice.
whatever the fuck is happening right now?
is this a april fools chapter or are you serious about this?
The entire fucking story did a 180 and became super sugoi and friendly all of a sudden. No offense but fuck that bullshit.
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I keep reading because some part of me is holding out hope that it will make some goddamn sense by time it's done. I'm too far invested into this story at this point to stop now.
I want to understand what the hell is going on. I like the premise, and I liked the beginning and original story. I enjoyed reading this story as well. It was when it started taking M. Night Shyamalan, Lil-Miss-Rarity, Willy Wonka-ass twists that I started losing momentum. I don't know what you are trying to accomplish with all this, but I want to.
You have writing chops, I enjoy your writing, I just don't know what you are trying to prove.