When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Wow, Twilight is an asshole.
Wow, Twilight.
Way to forget all your friendship lessons that you've been learning since season 1.
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I don't even know if Twilight is ignorant or not, but Sunset Shimmer used to be a pony. Wasn't originally a human. I also find it stupid that she is basing all her judgement of humans over on Sunset Shimmer, ironically a pony-turn-human.
4359230 You couldn't be closer to the truth if you WERE the truth and was masturbating.
4359247 This will be elabortated on in further chapters, but Sunset isn't the worst 'human' she'd encountered.
Wow, I thought it was impossible, but you have managed it. You made me hate Twilight. It is very hard to make me hate her in a fan fiction, but by Jove you've done it. I would give you a trophy but, I don't have enough money. Keep it up though.
4359255 ....Flash Sentry?
Gonna go ahead and assume that the gryphon was Gilda and I'm gonna say she deserved to get the shit beat out of her. Don't get me wrong, I actually like her character in the show and most fanfics, but boy is she nasty in this. Good fanfic, looking forward to future chapters.
4359305 Wait. And. See.
This is far worse than waifu-stealing.
twilight just bucked herself sideways, i want to know what will celestia do now...
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Are you going off-canon? Because they left on at least somewhat amiable terms in the movie. It is also interesting that she doesn't even think of the human- mane six in exception. I'm looking forward to the next installment!
4359311 Eagles and lions are extremely prideful, territorial creatures. Eagles just in general, and lions of anything not in their pride. Both are purely predatory, and highly aggressive.
Griffons are therefore extremely territorial, hostile, arrogant creatures by nature. Jason offended her, and then (in her eyes) challenged her. Fecal matter has such ascended into the ceiling-mounted rotating oscillator.
Wow... this chapter sure had a lot of "DAAAYUUM!" moments in it... why do I feel like G3 ponies would have a better grasp of their actions and a better idea of what's going on than these yokels?
4359327 Yes.
I have taken the liberty of separating this from the show's canon. With the suicidal human in Equestria, dark overtones, blood, and uncharacteristic blatant hatred, anything less than an Alternate Universe tag wouldn't make any sense.
Jaysus, boy, you've set my blood to boil, kudos
4359252 So poetic.
and now we get back on track of celestia coming.
4359326 Exactly considering Celestia was the one who sent Jason to Ponyville, I can't wait to see what Celestia tells Twilight
Yeah I also can't wait for Jason to explode onto Twilight once he finds out why she slammed the door in his face.
Twi writes to Tia about Jason?
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Probably tell twilight that shes being a bitch to someone that has done nothing wrong and that Celestia knew about. When Celestia finds out that he has gone this long on his own and his situation gotten so bad that he tried to commit suicide I forsee an epic level (verbal) beat down to happen.
Oh, Twilight. If only you knew what was coming.
4359375 can you kill rainbow dash. And maybe gravely injure twilight, please?
4359432 dis gun g Gud indeed
What is this with the odd group Jason runs into? I thought this story was just between the mane six and Jason. Where is this story going?
my guess is that this group purpose is for jason to tell celestia that he received more compassion and care from a group of non-ponies on a single day than from her little ponies on 3 years
your here! Let's go get that filthy human!
hold on. I want you to go somewhere first
where?
the mmon bitch!
i dont think getting into a fight in his condition was all that wise, but hey kudos to him for being able to do it in the first place
So, are you trying to make every single character except Applejack, Fluttershy, and Jason unlikeable? Especially Twilight? It's like she's intentionally trying to disappoint Celestia at this point.
It's no wonder she had such a bad time in the mock-human world, if she's this xenophobic, she kinda deserves being made fun of.
This Twilight is a bitch for sure, but you still have a ways to go to reach the extreme bitch levels of Twilight in "Human Nature" and "What Came Before and Beyond" My god was she a mega bitch in those.
Oh and picking a fight with a Griffin, this guy has one hairy sack on him to do that.
Celestia herself is not blameless here. three years pass and she never bothered to check to see how he was doing.
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In a better direction it seems.
This chapter is short, painful, and pretty damn awesome!
It's good to see that all the characters have strengths and weaknesses to them. It's pretty rare to have a story without a perfect character anywhere in it, but this one pulls it off admirably.
Despite all she's trying to do for Jason, Applejack still thinks of him as an animal deep down
Twilight's flaws have a nice big spotlight on them
Jason has no control over his temper (if he had settled for choking out Gilda instead of trying to kill her he could have won the respect of her and all the predator types in the camp, but in the fight he lost his mind and that opportunity)
Hmmm. Writing to Celestia are we?
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Enjoy Twilight. I know I will
For dealing with writer's block.
http://www.cracked.com/blog/5-tips-punching-writers-block-in-face/
4359687 my hypothesis: twilight is going to get rekt
is impressive how this fic get featured every time a new chapter is posted
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Unless the entire Canterlot High gathered to beat and rape Twi, I don´t know how can she be justified believing shit like "Even in her own world, all a human was good for was destruction and trouble", or that Jason deserves to die.
4359698 Despite her intelligence, Twilight does have quite the propensity for thoughtlessness. In Lesson Zero, she brainwashed the entire town with no thought to the other ponies' well-being.
4359701 I'll be sure to check it out, thanks.
4359687 Whatever you think it is? It's worse. MUCH worse.
4359646 Because you touch yourself at night.
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4359673 She still thinks he's an animal, alright. I also think she has some...baser motivations. It would be an awesome parody of the "human comes to Equestria and ponies are hot for him" trope, which I hate with a passion (ESPECIALLY when it's second-person, lousy wish fulfillment).
4359477 Can't wait for the ponies of Ponyville, the mane 6 and Twilight especially getting the ''What the Hell, Hero?'' speech.
I really hope you don't have Celestia end up taking the side of the 6
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There isn't going to be rape right? That's a little beyond my limit of what I can take in stories, music, and movies.
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Another possible complication from Jason's end. Besides leaving his last fuck in Ponyville? If Gilda got into a dominance challenge, well a human might not understand how it ends. Heck, are we even genetically programmed to get it?
From Gilda's end, it was a scrap to place Jason in the hierarchy. Except he doesn't give up when down, or stop when she goes down. To a human? Jumped by an apex predator, only one of us is walking away from this, and I don't want to be dinner.
Call me crazy, but I kind of like how Twilight is being an asshole in this fic, blaming the human for everything. Not only it adds some more tension to the story(despite being kind of common in the best fictions), but it puts emphasis in her personality to immediatly jump to the worst conclusion. And, as I said before, ponies tend to be xenophobic, and base their opinions of an entire species in just a select few(who just happen to be the bad seeds, it seems), instead of analyzing it completely.
Don't get me wrong here - I don't think her actions are correct - in no way you should despise a visitor just because he's of another species, because that's plainly racist and xenophobic. It's that the concept of it - while it's "stereoptical" in some ways - is generally better than "John just arrived in Eqeustria and instantly befriended all of the *cringe* Mane Six and all of Ponyvile and married Flutershy and had many children. The END."
The reason I cringed when I said Mane Six is that I don't really like using Mane instead of Main.
4359868 ...I will neither confirm nor deny the possibility of Applejack or Gilda ing Jason's with a in
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Oh. Well that's different. Just as long as he learns to love it in the end.