When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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4339905 me gusta this
dash is a fucking hypocrite, she was friends with a goddamn GRYPHON, what is essentially a super-carnivore
Civilized Applejack? White Pony's Burden much?
4340561 And also a well-known species, common enough to be represented in the Equestria Games and considered equal to ponies. Familiarity eliminates fear.
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4340568 and humans are extremely similar to Minotaurs in form with the head being the main difference between the two. They(outside of the main six) also haven't treated Spike, a true omnivore from a species with a predilection for meat, which is known to ACTUALLY EAT PONIES badly at first meeting.
I wonder how she would react to Fluttershy's routine feeding of fish to animals? Would she maintain that position or would she sputter about for a way to excuse Fluttershy's actions or her bigotry?
I like how your both showing reasons for why they fear him, and at the same time; show casing blatant bigotry towards him.
Rainbow Dash: He's not a pony! He's automatically evil.
Me: What about Gilda?
Rainbow:.......
i liked the other versions better because it had more feeling it seemed like and involved celestia
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I just wanted to let you know that whenever you post a chapter I get extremely happy and read it immediately with religious fervor. So thanks for that!
Now to read this
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Till I see more, my judgement is reserved,
4340603 That's a nice argument you have. It would be a shame if someone...picked it apart piece by piece.
1: Iron Will WAS often described as a "monster" by the ponies. The only one who liked him was Fluttershy. He was portrayed as loud, aggressive, and confrontational. Why? Because that's what the ponies expected him to be. Iron Will was a business man, and used the stereotype associated with him to make money.
2. Spike is a pint-sized purple lizard with "the cutest widdle chubby cheeks". He is SO far removed from what ponies think of when they hear "dragon" that the connection just isn't made. Add in that he was raised by a pony to ACT like a pony (including not eating meat...seriously, it has never even been mentioned), and there you have it.
so much facepalm. looking forward to update.
Dash is PROUD of contributing to the starvation of a human? Wow that's evil. And no one calls her on it. I hope she (and the others) get what they deserve. You know, I like where this is going. Also, you made me curious as to how accurate to the show your world building/lore would be if you are hinting at it.
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Correction: Rarity (and I think Pinkie Pie) were the only ones to call Iron Will a monster, and that's mostly because of how Iron Will has transformed Fluttershy - normally shy, kind, and innocent - into such an angry asshole.
4340568 Doesn't change the fact that they eat meat too, just like Jason. She's a filthy hypocrite that I hope gets buried alive by Celestia when Sunbutt finds out.
Awesome pace for releasing new chapters! I hope this continues
4340790 Even so, my point still stands. Humans are a completely new thing to Equestria. They behave in strange, alien ways, don't look QUITE like any other species aside from sharing a similar upper-body structure to minotaurs, and (possibly) unlike minotaurs, eat meat.
Seriously, I don't know what Equestrian minotaurs eat. The minotaur in the old myth was a maneater, but how much of that carries over into MLP? Something tells me they're vegetarian, but I can't be sure.
Either way, Jason is a meat-eating intelligent alien that was told to fuck off by the Head Bitch of Ponyville.
All these reasons could also just be bullshit excuses the ponies are using to justify their irrational fear and dislike of Jason.
gawd most of the mane six are complete dicks. btw i know that's the point just sayin' o3o
i liked how the story is developing so far! im intrigued for whats going to happen next with Jason. as for AJ the whole "Taming" thing sounds dark lol. if only she knew we're omnivores
also you know what else would be interesting to see some of the ponies lose their connection to the elements since they don't seem to be living up to said values. that's something ive never seen in stories that revolve around the mane six being evil or w/e. have the consequences of their actions catch up.
Ill be honest with you, the moment I read this I got the sudden feeling that craps gonna hit the fan REALLY fast! I have the feeling they are going to do something to make everything even WORSE if thats even possible... and when I read how Dash was purposly keeping him from being able to eat I realized that if this is taking a realistic aproch as it looks to be then there is NOTHING the ponies can do to make this right in any way shape or form... Jasons better off trying to live with a non-pony race at this point
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That'd have gone a lot better in the story instead of in a comment. Show, don't tell, bro.
4340905 People wanted dark. By the time I'm done with this, Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory will look like comedies. The fact that the worst of it is coming from us learning what these otherwise harmonious, normal, happy little ponies have ALREADY DONE with no remorse is just my personal touch.
4340932 I already think rainbow factory and cupcakes are comedies! So try hard my friend, hope you like cupcakes.........
This is a very good chapter, but I really don't like how short it was.
4340972 And yet it is my longest so far.
I COULD try 10k word chapters and have them out maybe two or three weeks apart instead of having new material every other day or so, but I have the attention span of a fruitfly.
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At least AJ is trying. Even if it's counted as 'too little, too late.' And even if she doesn't know how to go about it. She probably shouldn't have involved her friends if they're going to keep spouting opinions like paintbucket.
Except Fluttershy, because she been known to study biology.
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You know what....Maybe AJ should leave him be if something of that magnitude is in the future.
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Then it doesn't change the fact that these ponies are assholes. (albeit Celestia)
4341002 But then we wouldn't have a story! Nope. Obsessed she shall stay.
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Yeah, that's true.
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Until you have her smiling the red smile?
4341019 Until something.
4340996 Aww, I see, well I'm kinda similar, but I have (Almost) no social life, so I have more time to write... though that may not be the case soon.
4341029 I'm also working my way through college, so that's the majority of my days. I usually have a choice between sleeping and writing.
4341039 Yeah, I prefer to write
HE'S A FUCKING SAPIENT BEING! NOT A FUCKING ANIMAL!
I noticed that you outright answered the comments in Jason's dialogue when he said that being angry (justifiably so) wouldn't solve anything. I vehemently disagree, but hey, I'm a vindictive shit by nature.
I find it hilarious how dense Rainbow can be. If he WAS a carnivore stopping him from eating a fish would probably make him pissed and even more hungry. And when a carnivores pissed, no more nice guy towards the ponies. Also, when the fu*k was it rainbows job to decide who can eat what? Fluttershy gives fish to her little animal friends, but apparently Rainbow is such an &$$hole that you can't eat fish.
If that was me, I would of lost my morals ages ago and would probably go on a blind rampage through town. And knowing the ponies, they'll run and hide. Then the mane six will use the EOH on me...and I don't know what would happen. I don't even think the elements would allow the mane six near them. They haven't exactly shown the magic of friendship.
4341233 ALSO, none of them even seem guilty for the fact he attempted suicide because of them! Now, maybe they don't know, but why has no one questioned why AJ feels so bad? I would love to go in their as an OP red and black Alicorn to just #%%##3#%$ #$#$ while shoving a &-&-$$# stick up there ##$#$ while proceeding to #$$%$%$%*$.
4340932 If you can pull this off you got my respect if it turns out to make cheerilees garden a comedy you get..... A shout out?
I love RF and cupcakes already, SOOO
MY BODY IS READY
4341233 to be more exact
Rarity wasn't generous
Fluttershy was not kind
Applejack was technically honest
Rainbow was loyal to ponies
And .... What does magic even represent?
Sometimes it is good to take a walk. It can solve many problems and lets destiny decide what should happen to you. Jason took a walk to see is fate or death would meet him first and it seems that fate was the faster one this day
You know, I'm looking forward to the Big Realization, when the rest of the Mane 6 realize exactly how bad they messed up, preferably with the Princess(es?) letting them know, in harsh and certain terms, exactly how bad they did.
Perhaps Luna uses her dream-powers to learn what they did to Jason? (Hopefully in a horrific nightmare that draws the observer into the dreamer's position- no better way to learn than through the eyes of the victim, after all). It could be made suitably dark.
Or maybe Discord is released and they discover that through their actions, the EoH no longer work.
Twilight wasn't friendly.
Fluttershy wasn't kind.
Rarity wasn't generous.
Pinkie denied someone laughter, and hope.
Rainbow Dash placed her "loyalty" in prejudice.
Applejack denied the truth, and is doing so even now. ("Maybe he can be tamed." In other words, "he is not a sapient being.")
If Discord put them each through what they had made him go through, I think that it would scar them for a long time, to know that they demonstrated such hypocrisy: preaching about love, tolerance, and friendship while striking out at an innocent who just needed a chance.
I can also see Celestia being hit hard by what they've done- when she sees that the ponies who actually embody what is good in Equestria acted so malicious
(RD and AJ in particular) towards someone in need, going as far to drive that person to suicide, well... that will devastate her. The resulting shit-hits-the-fan- fest will be MASSIVE.
If you already have an idea worked out, that's fine, but I'm just saying these above ideas have the potential to be dark. Especially in the hands of an author like you.
Keep it up!
Anyway, this is gonna be good.
for some reason it took me this long to find a song I felt fit pretty well
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4341586 this. this would be amazing to see put into the story.
THE CHEESE WHEEL HAS SPOKEN!
Liking more and more... for the perhaps more realistic HiE ever... Jason is for ponies just another monster of the everfree, and according to Yellow Quiet, a scary one at that, also Squigglemane says he stinks even when clean. I wouldn't care how polite could be a poop smelling xenomorph, don't gonna be caught interacting with it.