When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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5068159 Nope.
Not exactly the sweet, sweet revenge I was hoping for, but I'm hoping it leads into something.
Also does this mean that you're back to writing for this?
OH MY GOD< OH MY GOD< OH MY GOD, I LITERALLY JUST PASSED THIS LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO READ, THEN I SCROLL BACK DOWN TO SEE THE UPDATE, THANK YOU
5072110 Yup. I'm gonna finish it if it kills me.
And it may very well do just that.
Also, this isn't going to torture or kill the mane six for teh lulz. I've gone through several chapters saying they are untouchable to Jason. But something big is gonna happen at the very end. Something that changes the face of Equestria forever. Discord is involved. Jason is involved. Shit. Is. Going. Down.
At the very, very end of the story.
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I will get the shovel
The fan of the show doesn't know Zecora?
thats it? i... was expecting more
Oh the Bearers are gonna get it
I felt like he was going to take it to the press, but dose Equestria have free press?
5072124 50k words into the story and I'm still having to say Zecora wasn't in the show in this universe. She's just now arriving. She's three years late.
5072125 It warms my heart knowing you bastards will never be satisfied. It means I'm doing something right.
I only have one complaint about this. YOU TAKE TOO FUCKING LONG TO UPDATE ANYTHING! Other that that keep up the good work.
5072152 A man who gives no fucks is never late. A man who gives no fucks isn't early, either. He arrives when he fucking gets there.
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5072156 Touché.
Someone go get the video of people screaming get on with it.
What... was that bit with Zecora? It's like the story just time traveled backwards without explanation and did something totally random. And why doesn't he know who she is? Or what poison joke is?
5072169 I'm just gonna leave this here.
I just don't get jason's ultamate plan here but i'm assuming that he's gonna use some kind of potion to make twilight and the others pay?
I just dont know m'kay so anypony could please help me?
please?
Can't but wonder why Jason thinks the press will work. If he's already been told that they are above the law, then why does he think an autobiography destroying their public image will ever be allowed to see the light of day. Or that even if it does get published, it won't be immediately recalled and those who read it kept silent? Seems like a wild goose chase, and I feel like that's where his plan is going to lead, and it's just going to make him even more hateful. It feels like a slow somewhat aggravating build up into this guy finally going mad and attacking someone.
I'm honestly surprised there isn't a TVTropes page dedicated to Ending and this. Feels like there should've been one by now.
5072174 It has been over three years since he's gotten any, and dat booty had me like
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And to add up
Nice to see that INRE has been updated because for a while now i thought that INRE WAS dead forever...
And dont worry VLAD i'll help at "patreon" at anyway i can
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Physical wound can be heal, but words.....They last very long.
Atleast AJ accept that what she and her friend did was wrong.
5072175 Okay. Lemme clear this up for everyone.
Jason isn't a violent person. His first instinct was to use the law to get justice. His second plan is to use the press. This says that he doesn't become violent unless he is in immediate danger, and he calms down from that kind of agitation quickly.
Jason isn't a violent person.
Even when his first plan to resolve things peacefully (well I say 'peace') goes up in smoke, he doesn't immediately go psycho-killer and make them run-run away. Jason is going to exhaust all peaceful methods open to him. To him, violence is a last-ditch effort. He doesn't want to physically harm anypony if he doesn't have to.
Because Jason isn't a violent person.
"...Don't name any of mah friends." My smile dropped. "Do that, and ya got a deal."
Jason: "Fine...deal. I will identify them as Element Bearers." I scowled. "But no names."
"...Deal."
Me:
5072183 If someone wants to make one, I'd be happier for it.
5072175
Well since its going to be endorsed by the Element of Honesty herself, mean that it was a true event thus it shame them badly like how RD wouldn't get into Wonderbolt or how Rarity reputation will be tarnished....Especially Twilight reputation as new Princess thus it will cause the noble to force Celestia to take back that title from her thus shaming her greatly. It kinda smart really.
>>SPudRum
Ohh...
Now i see it,thanks anyway
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For what it's worth, I have every confidence that you will bring this story to an eminently satisfying and enjoyable end, and have since the first chapter.
5072114 please make so that Discord, Jason against Mane 6 with the final battle of Applejack vs Jason
5072218
Hahahahahahaha......No.....Jason is gonna get AJ booty
I means it's not like the element bearers are national heroes, and everypony knows who they are...... Oh wait
5072227 And that's why Big Mac takes care of the taxes and sales.
5072226 NO JASON BETTER GET HIS HANDS OFF HER APPLEJACK IS MY WAIFU DON'T PULL A FLASH SENTRY! I can dream can't I ?!
5072232 I steal waifus and waifu accessories.
We havent really seen the other elements for awhile now. Im personally interested in whats going on in Dashes head. Is she all "How dare he fight back!?! He's supposed to lie down, and take my crap!" or is she realizing that she cant push him around anymore?
5072235 DAMN YOU WAIFU STEALER FEEL THE WRATH OF THE VAMPIRE KILLER AND HYPER BEAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5072241 When she gets transferred to Ponyville Hospital, we'll find out. Jason will too, if he somehow stumbles upon her powerless in a hospital bed with tubes and wires sticking out of her. Not sure how I'll have that go. Either A, "My God what have I done", or B, "remember this moment, all the things I could've done to you but didn't."
5072252 I see your wall of exclamation points and raise you a chorus of Pinkie.
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I know it has already been established the ponies are in the wrong here, but what is she seeing here that indicates he's incorrect with this?
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How about C: this lesson is called a self-fulfilling prophecy. You made it clear that you would never let me be, you'd keep coming until I was dead. You never stopped to think about what you started. You made it clear that if I want to live in peace, first I have to kill you.
Yay its back, no idea where its going and im not sure i even uderstood the second half of this chapter but its still here, awesome!!!
ps Twilight is worst pony/complete asshole in this story.
-Cheers
5072282
The audience knows the ponies are in the wrong. In their minds the moment he started fighting back, physically or otherwise, he stopped being an intelligent creature and became a monster. Doesn't matter what it was, equestrians solve all their problems with apologies and hugs.
This one is STILL going? I kind of hope it ends soon, not too say it's bad but you really didn't think out his thoughts towards the Equines through.
Getting him to love and forgive them when they treated him like garbage every moment he was there.
*Vomits* Reminds me of a certain and destroyed anime ninja theme'd canon story.
To hell with forgiveness there needs to be some ass-kicking or SOME form of retribution for the biast views on him that nearly killed him.
5072311 They need Luna to let them in on her 'discovery'. This is a shit payback. Nothing on the author, I'm sure he knows what he's going to do with it next, iow, make me take it back.
5072282 Jason's in the wrong too. Just because his actions are understandable and sympathetic doesn't mean they're right. There's no heroes or villains.
Jason is blatantly manipulating Applejack into betraying her friends. She knows it, but she has a guilt complex that makes it very hard to tell him no. Almost impossible.
The ponies are evil, yes. They actively tried to destroy Jason. But Jason has his own evil. His evil is acidic. He's eating away at those closest to him until there's nothing left.
5072328 And I love it, I really do. Jason's bit anyway.