When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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I wanna see some mad bloodlust, nah jk. Anyway, get hype for an ultimatum!
Eeyup, I like this, please keep going
love it
why?
cause it's fabulous
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My mistake, sorry
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He tried giving the pony as much space as possible. That's what he meant. It's an older phrase, used mostly when "giving someone a wide berth so they can get past."
A link to the prequel on the description would be greatly appreciated.
4300827 Done
4300651
okay then.
4300355 Sorry buddy, this isn't that kind of story.
4300977 I hope he puts these racist assholes in their place by the time this story is half-way through. You heard me, Vlad.
APPLEJACK, QUIT BEING A DUMB WHORE AND LISTEN TO WHAT HE HAS TO FUCKING SAY! JESUS FUCKING CHRIST, THESE PONIES ARE RACIST ASSHOLES!
Good story though
Please tell me you'll have him putting the ponies in their place at some point
The ride never ends
Human: Let's see here: You hate me for no real reason at all other than the fact that I look different than you do, and your surprised that I insulted you? Yeah, pardon my language but: Go buck yourself!!
4301152 I also want to know why she's so keen on seeing him as some kind of pet.
This is one weird story.
Maybe this will turn into a martyrdom of self pity in an attempt to make the ponies to see their wrongs and shower him with remorse and sympathy. Hehehe...
Love the story, very uniqe, unlike so many hie fics ive read approved and looking forward to reading on :3
'Reads title of fic'
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4301197 Hint: Both Applejack and Jason's main conflicts and characteristics in this universe are in the chapter-names.
4301152 Remember their conversation in the hospital. His confession of never seeing his family again hit her hard. Now think back to "Somepony To Watch Over Me". Applejack being protective to the point of an unhealthy obsession was made clear. Now add in that she had never really thought of him as a person until she spoke to him at the hospital, and you get a lot of guilt.
Obsessive protectiveness, natural stubbornness, guilt, and unwanted sympathy. She thinks she needs to take care of him ALL THE TIME. She went from one extreme to the other.
4300977 I have that hope too, but even with that I kind of want the ponies to earn his forgiveness and friendship since an "I'm sorry" won't fix what they have done.
4301338 Is Applejack aware of what they did? That they all as a communicate abused him so much that it drove him to near suicide. Kind of surprised though, I'd have expected that after hearing he was abuse for no fault of his own, that he'd try and re-commit suicide right there in the barn out of spite.
Anyway keep up the good work this story is interesting.
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Yes I have an understanding of older phrases. Bite me.
I followed you a little while ago to see this story nice work
Just out of curiosity, why do the chapter titles spell out "ADOPT"?
i would ask each and everyone the same question.
WHY DO YOU HATE ME?
4302285 OH SHIIIT
4302285 That is for me to know, and you to find out.
...will he be dying soon? 'Cos, with all the shit he keeps being put through, I'm fairly certain he will return to his suicidal tendencies.
4302447 Oh friend, it's only just begun. I'm really just making this all up as I go along. I know about as much about what happens next as you do.
I prefer spontaneous writing. Having everything all laid down and planned is just so...boring.
Congrats on getting you first story featured! :)
I'm curious as to why he never tried to make the trek to Canterlot and seek help from the Princesses. If they were there to help him one time, I'm sure that they would at least give him some insight about why the town acts the way they do, especially Twilight from the original story. And before you say "The ponies of Canterlot would freak out". Yes they would, but then the guard would inevitably take him in as a "prisoner", and he would have to talk to Celestia or Luna at some point. One of them has to have some sort of answer to these things.
This story is really good
I'm majorly surprised that it's your first
I don't know how long AJ can keep Jason away from the rest of the family, but I'm excited to find out what will happen then.
This story also makes me wonder, what does one do after trying to kill themselves?
It obviously took some forethought, having to get the rope and all, so it meant he had no other plans.
With a bit of AJ's support he's got more options available to him, but what would he want to do past "Eat, be clean, sleep well"?
In any case I'm looking forward to more!
Jason climbed to his feet and put out a hand toward Applejack.
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4302844 I give that out of
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4302804 Oh right, Applejack has a family. Suppose I can write that in, wonder where this takes the story now?
As for your second question...I have some firsthand experience, so I can think of something.
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I think I'll keep reading for now.
If only to find out if you ever answer the question of why all the ponies hate Jason.
so many questions, so few answers.... i like it
4302855 GIF That man a Ci-gar
4327355 Celestia does seem the type to let Twilight deal with problems while she stays in the castle. Celestia only showed up once during Lesson 0 and that was because Twilight started the problem in the first place and couldn't be solved except by direct intervention.
From a technical point of view, giving the readers time to see how this realization (of being directly responsible for harming another living thing) effects Twilight would be incredibly satisfying.
4302285 omfg you genius
ILLUMINATI CONFIRMED!
Bitch ass Everfree Forest.
As I read this I can only think one thing:
Do you want a villain, Applejack?
Because this is how to create villains.
Seriously. Giving him nothing and telling him he's not welcome is one thing. This tsundere bullshit and forcing him to live under constant fear of being discovered, that's how you drive someone mad. He has even less agency than before, and the "home" he's being force to accept isn't safe for him at all.
Beyond food nothing she's doing is good for him, it's just another kind of abuse.
At least before he was free.
But... nobody likes Applejack.
4588594 She's okay, for a background pony.
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It's a joke me and my friends have. We all have our favourite ponies, but none of us like Applejack at ALL.
That accent, it annoys me no end
4601952 Applejack is my favorite for several reasons: She's hardworking, honest, always ready to help and I just get a smile from her. I'm a bit like her, minus the accent.