When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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It doesn't break the story. We'll see where this goes.
That's what I'm talking about.
I only feel tiny shreds of guilt.
You have me interested.
Go on...
Oh boy, new chapter! Even if it did take an unexpected direction...
MUAHAHAHAHAHHA!
Fuck. Yes.
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29 chapters in and stuff is finally going to start happening
Praise the sun
Oooooh dis gonna be goooooood
Oh damn this is gonna be goooooood
Still loving it. Should have expected it. But I cannot help but remembering the other sequel to the original
Oh man...
...I think I'm in love with the author...
"Fuck if I know! The griffons, maybe! The minotaurs! But if I ever see a fucking pony again, I'll jump in front of a train!" I heard a faint pop, and Celestia appeared in front of me in a flash of light.
...all right then where is the nearest train?
aaaaaaannnnnnnnnddddd he took the bait, never take the bait
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Am I the only one reading this in Vegeta's voice?
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You have my attention. . .
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Canon Vegeta, or TFS Vegeta?
4960634 that's what I wake up to every morning
Yup I just love when a random dude in armor is standing over and does an awesome pose, really brightens my day
Id take it. At this point after all of the lies, deceits, and general all around pain that ponies had caused me: I'd jump at a chance to pay em back. Screw em.
4960624 This will be nothing like that. Jason will NOT get any superhuman powers...
SPOILER ALERT
beyond metabolizing ambient magic to boost healing.
Clearly he should not have let this conversation with Discord progress as far as it has, but since he has...I am looking forward to seeing what comes next.
I don't like how discord can pull stuff out of dimensions, but I liked this chapter but I will be cautious in later chapters.
4960664 Discord made references to things in our universe in his song "Glass of Water". It's flimsy, but I ran with it.
4960652 Canon Vegeta, DBZ.
First, he's all about the ponies, then he want's nothing to do with them. He's finally ready to leave but when presented a very obvious bait and hook deal by Discord he bites it? If he had any of that loyalty Discord was saying he had then he should've said no and walked away. What exactly did he have to worry about five ponies? Especially if they're Canterlot nobles, just give a small growl and they'll be stabbing each other to try and run. It's amazing how they actually armed themselves and are trying to confront him.
This is gonna be good!
Don't trust Discord! He is a liar! Just get some money and some papers from Celestia and take the first ship to the Griffon Kingdom
There was foreshadowing that something like this would happen. I don't think this is completely out of the blue. That said, I do love it.
Not bothered, no character (up to now) has been molested sexually but physically? That's another story all together (for Jason that is)
My one regret is that I have but one up-vote to give.. I like how you're handling Discord as a trixter and someone who sowes destruction by temptation. I think it's best how you're giving Jason the degree of control. He doesn't want the world to burn (even though he should). He want retribution.
"Justice is merely Revenge when everyone else agrees."
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Revenge! Please!
As someone who usually has "View Mature" turned off—I'm not into clop, so I'm a little uncomfortable when I see porn in the Featured box—I don't really know what constitutes a Mature rating that doesn't involve the usual pornography. That said, I haven't seen anything since the Rating bump that clearly justifies it. I don't read that many stories that involve someone in the wake of a suicide attempt, though, so maybe those themes are much darker than I realize.
Regarding the story itself; I dearly, dearly hope for some kind of resolution. I want a long, civil discussion between Jason and the ponies that doesn't abruptly end in Jason trying to throttle one of them. I want them to actually talk, I want to hear Celestia react, I want some consequences. I've enjoyed the story, but, to me, it seems like every other chapter starts with Jason regaining consciousness from doing something stupid that barred any legit progression in the previous chapter.
BUT. I will keep reading. If the author's note is to believed, I'll get what I'm hoping for in the coming chapters. It's a good story, I just hope you won't drag it out any further.
I remain simpy intrested
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The story is pretty absurd at this point. I'm just staying to see how far down this will snowball.
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He probably realized that Discord wouldn't leave him alone until he helps him do something to the elements.
4960726 I know exactly where I'm taking this now. The story is just over half over, but things are definitely going to start paying off.
Don't' stop just yet.
This chapter has me at half mast.
I NEED THIS!!!
4960675 Have you ever heard of mob mentality? Put people into a group and they think they're invincible. The Canterlot nobles may be spineless, sniveling insects, but they're herd-animals. Our mob-mentality is infinitely stronger with them.
4960743 "FINE! YOU WERE RIGHT!"
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why do that? if you know someone is a habitual liar you can trust that they will lie to you so you can plan accordingly. someone that is truthful is much harder to read as you can never tell when they will lie to you.
I like where this is going!
ponies still not punished
I vote for a thousand year vacation in tartarus
keep the life spans the same afterwards
so that 90% of their waking lives were spent in hell
mmmmmmmmm
I am suddenly very disappointed with this story.
But I am interested in seeing where it goes.
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Nah m8, when he encounters Celestia it will fail and he will pass out from something. Then when discord helps him the magic will cause him to pass out. A teleport to ponyville will make him pass out. And hurting the ones he once adored will somehow make him die or just pass out.
4960726 Actually yeah. At this point, even if Discord is using him: I don't care. They're needs to be consequenes for what they've done to him.
I think that 'his way' will be a collection of all the stupid crap every main characters has ever done, a huge 'fuck you' to the Princesses with all of Equestria to see, and a lifetime of being an advisor to the Zebra Nation.
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4960675 He could be testing the waters trying to figure out what Discord's game is especially after finding out that it was Discord that got him to Equestria in the first place. I think he is just playing along for now better to let Discord think that he has succeeded in manipulating him then letting on that he failed and risk getting forcibly discorded like Fluttershy in return of harmony. Discord may have experience deceiving ponies but he is dealing with a human now and humans are a lot better at seeing through deception and even better are turning the tables and deceiving the deceiver.