When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Not the unholy retribution I was hoping for... Does that come later? I sure hope it does
...That's it?
3 chapters in such a short amount of time?
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Fuck that is exciting. Also a really good song. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
4812764 We got to see a bit of a breakdown from Jason, and now Celestia sees just how fucked up he was.
And Jason's fixation on Twilight as his bogeyman is now canon to the story! ...Even though we all know she's not to blame for everything.
Celestia you CUNT!!!!
4812766 That's it so far. It might just be me, but if Celestia had sedated me after something like that, I'd feel a little alienated. Now, who else lives there that he could turn to?
4812766 Also, now an emotionally-charged Celestia with confirmation that she (Twilight) really did play a part in his poor condition is all alone with her.
I like the Gregorian cover more, but it's a good song nonetheless.
Damn, this is tense. Please OP, just a little more?
He couldn't list his grievances? All is did was just freak out. Yes that's expected but to only freak out? Not go into any details; just "Everyone was mean to me"?
Maybe because I want to see them all get their comeuppance. And him diddling around with a tantrum is not getting anywhere...
Either way, I know that Closure, if any, is a long way off and a good smacking is well deserved too but some sort of details... uh, I can't describe properly... him explaining through flashbacks/scene building of all the times they made life hard for him. Meh, oh well, at least the story is still flowing.
This isn't great.
No, we need need more rage from Jason. Have him tore the main six apart with his words and anger!!!
"Even though we all know she's not to blame for everything."
Well yeah thats true, but shes responsible for alot of it.
BTW: Twilight, Dont you fucking dare. Dont you fucking dare act like your the one whose been wronged!!! I swear, if she does some bullshit in the next chap where she tries to come off like shes the victim....Im just gonna flip my shit.
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Ah, ok. Roundabout but that works too.
4812797 Celestia just sprang this on him. He was unprepared, starving, sleep-deprived, and his sanity is hanging on by a single thread. He'll be more composed in future confrontations. But he's basically a raving lunatic right now.
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Oh, he said it better than I did, yes more rage.
Less violent rage, more The Other rage. Word rage I guess?
4812820 Break them all by words. Make their mind shatter like glass!
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Point.
Didn't think of it that way. And I suppose it would show that she doesn't know how to properly handle individuals this far gone. Proof is in the show. Missed the warnings of on-coming Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis's ques slipped passed her while she was in disguise etc.
4812801 Well thank you for your feedback. But if you're not going to offer any constructive criticism, take a long walk off a short pier.
4812767 No don't slow down my heart can't take the excitement and waiting.
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I just need more
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"Three years, eh? Ever tried one hundred and nine years of torture by the hands of a crazy computer A.I. that became a god?"
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There is 3 updated chapter?
4812855 Are we talking about waiting?
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4812797 youve been tortured, beaten, starved, and humiliated by a group of people for three years. you are finally rescued by someone you kinda trust and a few short hours later you are face to face with the ring leader of that original group. how would you react? i guarantee the majority of humans would either have a panic attack or all that anger would cause them to attempt murder. or panic and attempt murder.
4812806 We all know that he will, becaue it will give our human character a reason to flip his shit... Well, ANOTHER reaon, that is.
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Now that's what I call edgy.
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Who is that?
There is one thing that's been bugging me for the past few chapters. In the original story, Jason tries to get a job everywhere else in town and goes to Twilight and the other Elements after he had already been turned away everywhere else. It would be a bit hard for Twilight to turn the other ponies against him when he already knows they were all against him before he ever talked to her.
Well, that wasn't the scene I thought was coming.
Not quite Twilight being sent to the moon, but hopefully this will rock her world enough to question her actions.
4812895 At first, they just wanted him gone' Like Zecora. The would run away from him.
Jason thinks it was Twilight who made Applejack kick him every time she saw him, Pinkie and Fluttershy avoid him, and Rainbow Dash go Darth Sidious on him.
We know this to be false, but Jason doesn't.
4812903 Who says it's finished? Now Celestia is alone with Twilight, right after seeing all of Jason's damage firsthand.
Then again I'm drunk as shit, so fuck everything.
4812876 I'd stare at her and keep repeating
Can I kill her now?
Can I kill her now?
Can I kill her now?
Can I kill her now?
Can I kill her now?
Can I kill her now?
Can I kill her now?
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He is Gorrister, from the book and game "I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream."
4812948 Oh no, she was a rotten scabby cunt. But she can't hold all the blame.
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Oh thanks
Now to watch as Twilight falls apart from her guilt... hopefully...
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Don't you just love details?
4812952 i am actually wearing a MINE MINE MINE shirt, complete with the seagulls from Disney land
4812806 need a spatula?
This is SO good! I MUST HAVE MOAR!
The trials, tribulations, pain and living hell that he has experienced is probably akin to torture.
There is one thing that is face about torture.
You either break not just their body, but their mind and soul as well,
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Or...
You don't let them live in the end because if you do. Generally they are pissed and they will seek retribution.
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Tia is letting Twilight get off a little too easy for my taste. Though, knowing you, it will just happen next chapter. By the way, that song is the first thing I thought of when I saw the chapter title.
This is soooooooooo good, I love that your posting more of it
I have no criticism for this scene so far. Now give me more! :P But take your time and make it good. Think you can do both quick and good? I know that's contradictory but I'd like to believe you're good enough ;)
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4812812 Ill bring the wabbajack
Was that last line directed at Celestia or Twilight? I can see it both ways, but the intent isn't clear for which one it was supposed to be.