I'm a human, the only one that is, living on a world full of ponies and I'm trying to make the best of it. But something happened that I thought impossible. I got pregnant.
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When Twilight said 'for science', I immediately thought of GLadOS.
Has Melody been living under a rock for the past three-quarters of a century?
nice chapter well done
4493990 More to do with her upbringing, I suspect.
You know, I really am enjoy the world you built and your characterization of everyone. Keep doing...*this* and I think you have a wonderful story in the works.
Letting Twilight poke at her might be a bad idea. Twilight gets a little carried away.
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I don't know how this hasn't been said yet, but all I heard coming out of Twilight's mouth was this:
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But it sure would be fun (and sexy) to watch.
Plot twist... a male human get's transported to Equestria.
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Double twist: he's gay.
If any one changes this story, I will kill them.
But I really like it. MOAR!!!!
Yeah, that's in-character for Twilight alright! If I were Melody, I'd be very, very careful about what I agree to. I mean, Twi would never set out to hurt her, but if this is mid-Season 2-Twi (prior to Cadence teaching her how to control hyperventilation), then she's capable of getting over-excited and maybe accidentally causing trouble and injury in her enthusiasm.
Then there's the question of who is responsible for Melody's condition. Depending on when we are in the timeline, it might be advisable for Fluttershy to ask Discord what he knows about this.
I guess I missed the point that Melody really is in a coltfriend and even husband hunt (and might have been for a while). Celcius seems to be a nice enough pony and his reaction to Twilight suggests that he's ex-Guard. Will it work out? Well, that's the thing about relationships; you never know until you try them.
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I thought of 'Girl Genius' myself; less homicidal but just as psychotic, so it fits Twilight fairly well.
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I think that more-or-less sums it up; I can see Twilight doing all of those things, anyway.
Why do I think theres going to be trouble ahead?
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Because this is Ponyville and it's rare for a month to go by without some horrendous Cthonic thing squelching out of the Everfree or Tartarus and then trying to eat the town?
4494074 Suppose so. Certainly can't say it is bad for her to think this.
Should be "a lot to me"
It seems very odd to me that Twillight is only now taking an interest in the only human in Equestria.
If Melody gets some share of the proceeds from any new branch of science she helps create she could make some serious money introducing human science and engineering to the ponies.
4495973 Thanks for catching that.
4494741 triple twist:
He's her father. Biological.
..............................
Melody and Celsius are rutting on the couch. Her homosexual father falls out of the sky and crashes through the roof, landing next to the couple.
Melody: "Daddy?!"
Father: "Melody? Where are we? How did I get here? What's going on? Why are you fucking a Technicolor Pegasus that doesn't even come up to you waist? Who is he?"
Melody: "....uhhhh...this is Celsius, my coltfri-"
Father: "Wait. YOUR FUCKING A GODDAMN PONY!!!"
he then faints, his head falling into a puddle of questionable origin.
Celsius: "....is he alright?"
Melody: ".....yeah, he'll be alright. He's gay."
Celsius: "...oh...okay."
Melody: "...so....wanna finish up in my room?"
Celsius: "...duh."
...........
*Note: I have nothing against homosexual people. At least two of my friends are gay. They are awesome.Therefore homosexual people are awesome.
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Not at all, I even wrote one myself, letting my character remark on that fact! :D
Check it out, it's a horrible piece I wrote when I wuz drunk!
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Meh. Not liking this cut and dry 'proceeds' thing. Too simple. Now Celsius has more motive to stay with Melody. Why take care of the kid when Science will?
I think Twilight should have let her know in private.
...
I'm a terrible person.
4495411 Because Equestria, that's why.
Hmmm.. I sense trouble ahead. Seems Celsius is a veteran as well.
Sound really cool. I like that there isn't the whole "OH MY GOD I CAN'T BE WITH A PONY" thing that a lot of other stories have. Waiting for the next chapter.
This is what i saw when Twilight mentioned science:
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Very strangly i found this:
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Seriously disappointed no-one made the joke about eggs yet.
4493978 same. For a second, I actually forgot this was a fimfic and had to remind myself, not that it stopped my brain from making everything I read come out in my head with glados' voice for a few seconds.
An interesting chapter. The funding would certainly help, melody will need it if she's to raise this hybrid of pony and human for fourteen years. wonder what it'll look like. Maybe it'll be have the upper half of a pony but the lower half of a human? Or maybe hooves instead of arms and a pony head?
4863586 tirek would mistake it for his own son/daughter as it would be... (pause for dramatic effect) a centaur!
Lol
4969230 Or... derpicdn.net/img/2014/2/28/563184/full.png
See NOW it's getting interesting. The little details of her life that inconvenience her, like the rug, are what make this seem more believable.
Heh, seems we both had the same idea about Twilight studying humans...for science.
Ponies really don't have any idea about genetics, do they? Twilight doesn't need anymore titles. It's already enough that she has doctorates in half of every known scientific field.
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I agree wholeheartedly.
Also, as a side not the clop you're writing isn't the greatest I've ever read but that's a good thing. The simplistic and sometimes silly moments in your clop scenes works so well with the rest of your story, it would be a detriment to write it any other way. Keep up the good work.