I'm a human, the only one that is, living on a world full of ponies and I'm trying to make the best of it. But something happened that I thought impossible. I got pregnant.
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If you're only learning English, I couldn't tell. You write lie a pro, and I didn't even catch any typos. Well done!
Rarity seems jealous as well. Something is up with Melody, and I don't think she is aware of it.
Good Chapter, your English was fine. Although...
Would probably be better worded as "Still, it felt so unbelievably good to the mare since she knew she could take this predator down.
That's the only one that I really noticed.
Huh, I never guessed Rarity thought Twilight was being played by Melody even though I did have a hunch Twilight liked Melody. It might be because we've seen things from Melody's point of view so we know she wasn't think about Twilight in that way...
I like this shift in focus. IIRC Melody thought she was taking advantage of AppleJack when she was drunk, yet here it looks likes it's reversed. Applejack feels she took advantage of Melody.
I can't wait to see more.
*flesh
Other than that, looks great! Congrats on your first English-only chapter!
So we've got a love triangle going on now... No, a love parallelogram. This should be interesting.
I vote Melody ends up with Best Pony...
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Urgh, can't believe I missed those. Thanks for pointing them out.
I don't remember if it was mentioned before, but does your Equestria touch on polygamy? AJ might get her wish. Hell, she might even help raise the kid once she finds out who daddy is.
For being your first foray into writing directly in English, you're doing great!
This chapter was excellent and i wonder if melody realizes all these mares liking her in more than a platonic way XD
Rarity might be crushing on Twilight herself, in which cases her actions, and accusations, could be irrational and fueled by jealousy.
Either that, or she is legitimately concerned for a friend. We shall see in time.
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I second this! There are too damned many native speakers that can't write this well. Good job!
5698898 ALL ABOARD THE HUMAN HYPE TRAIN
5699462 Pardon?
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Twilight said earlier in the story that she found an old book about herds in her library. The modern ponies don't do herds though.
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I guess I shouldn't be surprised AJ didn't use her ponytail as another extension. Maybe that would have solved the problem that Melody had in thinking that AJ didn't make her feel completely satisfied as much as stallions. Melody wants to be a pony because of that. Microphilia isn't her thing, but she's a demisexual in a land of diminutive, pastel ponies. She doesn't want to be alone and the ambient magic is granting her wish.
Speculative thinking is awesome.
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Ancient practices don't stop just because they're old or unpopular. Take hunting and fishing. Take holistic medicine. Gardening. Openly practiced demisexuality. Torture. War. Polygamy. Which ones are are chosen to be repressed and which ones are depressed upon by others?
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In my headcanon, pegasi and earth ponies are the one who practiced polygamy aka herds. Mostly 1 Stallion and up 3 mares. Living on the ground/air gave them enough space to build a population and the smaller numbers of stallions made herds (or flocks, in case pegasi) a necessity. Unicorns on the other hand always preferred mountains to settle down. Less space and so on. So they didn't have the space for many children or large herds. So it came to relationships with only one stallion and one mare. They invented marriage and so on.
After the unification, the nobility still were mostly unicorns. And what does the normal population? They try to be like the ponies they adore. (We humans do it still today, just with films stars and so on). So the earth ponies and pegasi copied the unicorns and took over this marriage thing from them. Its a bit like we humans evolved from living with all families of a village in one big house to several over a few thousand years.
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Funny, because that's the first thing I would have thought of doing... Rawr.
Do sex toys exist in this universe? I have to wonder... I mean, in a sense, it seems Melody is kind of reducing stallions to one specific piece if that's what she's after. Kind of sexist on her part, no?
But yes, you bring up a good point. Melody wanting to be a "pony" so she can find a stallion seems to be her motivation. If that motivation changes, OR if she finds that she can find a stallion (or a mare) without trying so hard, I think she'll be in a much better place.
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I figure there's a good old fashioned streak of racism there. Earth Ponies, Pegasi, and Unicorns were trying to emulate the alicorns who went and lived in the forest in castles surrounded by Earth Ponies. To keep the peace, they loved and tolerated the crap out of each other to get near the alicorns while some Earth Ponies developed a lot of hubris out of the system. After Luna's banishment, Celestia moved to the mountains surrounded by unicorns where they developed an even higher form of hubris towards Earth Ponies for Celestia moving up on the mountains. You see a lot of unicorns make fun of Earth Ponies and vice versa, but they usually leave the Pegasi out of it.
It's still a nice headcannon however, I just felt it a little incomplete.
shame on you, rarity! melody has a breakdown and all you can think of is that she's taking advantage of twi?!
This is really turning out an awesome story! Wish to see chapters more often
Poor Melody! The curse of the straight girl with gay friends who have fallen for her! Well, at least Applejack is mature enough not to fixate but Twilight has so little experience that you have to worry if she'd be able to handle the strain!
Not bad. Rarity sure did make a big jump in assumptions though.
Oh wow so I was wrong, it was Twilight who had the crush....
"Nearly every* evening"?