I'm a human, the only one that is, living on a world full of ponies and I'm trying to make the best of it. But something happened that I thought impossible. I got pregnant.
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Garbage.
Maybe it's because I have a massive headache and my reading comprehension is low, but...why Rarity's apparent hostility?
Oh well, with the new clothes now the healing can begin for Melody. Twilight is a good friend.
5667050 Someone's salty.
5667079 It isn't just you... I can't figure out why Rarity is upset either. It hasn't been that long since the last chapter (January I think?), but if feels like I've forgotten some key details...
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Oh Lord, Tio is probably seething at me right now. He thought it was vague, but since I read it through and correctly guessed the reason for Rarity's anger, I thought it could stand as is.
Ah well. It shall be elaborated in an upcoming future, especially as the perspective will shift.
As far as I can discern, the only possible reason Rarity could be angry is because Melody cast doubt on the diamonds. Gems, as we all know, are much less hard to come by in Equestria, but Melody's still probably carrying over the notion of their rarity from earth. Thus, when she expressed doubt at their being real, Rarity took umbrage at being accused of providing an inferior article - after all, finding gems is her specialty, and to have anyone suggest otherwise would be an insult.
At least, that's the only reason I can think of, because as far as I can tell no other explanation makes sense. I mean, sure, Rarity wasn't the first to be thanked, but she was, and being the element of Generosity should come with some tolerance, I think.
Interesting update. I'm guessing the reason Rarity was so miffed is because Melody asked if the diamonds were real. Could be something else, though. I feel pretty bad for Melody right about now... Trying to go back to being a person when she's been a "pony" this whole time is gonna be rough.
I couldn't help but think that the Tool song "Forty-Six & 2" somehow applies to Melody's situation particularly this part:
I've been crawling on my belly
Clearing out what could've been.
I've been wallowing in my own confused
And insecure delusions
For a piece to cross me over
Or a word to guide me in.
I wanna feel the changes coming down.
I wanna know what I've been hiding in
My shadow.
Change is coming through my shadow.
My shadow's shedding skin
I've been picking
My scabs again.
I have been forgetting things as of recent...this story is translated from another language? Are your authors notes translated as well, because they are perfectly fine English. Your editors and translator must do a good job, too, I couldn't tell at all.
I can't figure out why Rarity is miffed.
5668304 I can guess...
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Known to be pregnant and "decreasing in mass"... Yup, not hard to imagine why.
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Yes, this is translated from German. And I think, that my translators and editors do a very fine job too.
But the authors note I write myself. I'm practicing English a lot lately and it seems to pay off.
Shouldn't it be "increasing in mass"? After all, she's gaining mass during pregnancy.
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More importantly, mass isn't a major issue for clothing. What Rarity needs to worry about his Melody's soon-to-be significant change in volume.
5668753 Ah, German. Most of my ancestry stems from Germany, I hope to learn the language one day.
And yes, it is paying off.
i would say this took it's time, but considering how long it took me to post my last chapter, that would be the pot calling the kettle black i think.
Interesting. i am curious as to what rarity and twilight were referring to and why rarity is acting the way she is now.
I look forward to find out
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I can guess why. Melody's double-standard of her being a pony to the point where it upset Twilight greatly. Twilight had to be vague enough so that Melody wouldn't just ignore her and continue to be a pony. Because Melody thinks she's a pony, she was turning into one. Twilight wanted Rarity's help but she wouldn't give it to a faux pony. Rarity(Diamonds are her shtick) sold it cheap to Twilight(Knowing Melody wouldn't accept a gift from previous experience) even knowing it was going to Melody. It was designed to make her feel human again and to have others view her as something other than pony. Species Identity.
Another reason is that Melody is stealing Twilight's attention from her with her unusual condition.
I wonder if it's really reversible in mid transformation?
Sour rarity
THAT! That right there is pure written art! We need to see more of that!
Reading between the lines obviously isn't most of you guys strong suits is it. Think about it, flashy expensive gift, recent Twilight dialogue about herds. One plus one guys.
I think either Rarity is jealous of Melody's attention to Twilight because she likes Twilight. Or, she's jealous of the attention Twilight is getting because she likes Melody.