I'm a human, the only one that is, living on a world full of ponies and I'm trying to make the best of it. But something happened that I thought impossible. I got pregnant.
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Raw, raw, fuck the pone.
Awww...poor Melody...
But it is clear you always make it a priority to keep all of your chapters of high quality, which is truly what matters.
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I try at least.
Good chapter.
But I feel like the end, when she regress because of the 'bubbl' is a little quick. it's good and fine, but there is that little something that doesn't fit.
Maybe her introspection should be more detailed.
Hmmm... Interesting. This perhaps explains why she is pregnant.
While this didn't totally come out of left field, I'm interested to see what happens from here. Nice job.
Well this addresses something I've never seen before in an HiE story, a human that tries to be a pony rather than being a human. Self acceptance is a very important message and I rather like that you tackled this, it was well done too.
It seems like it would be an expected mistake for the doctor, considering I doubt he would have even known where to BEGIN dealing with a human.
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I don't know. She probably doesn't need a whole lot of introspection to realize that Twilight is telling her that she's been lying to herself for a very long time now in order to placate her deepest fears. Her reaction my have been a bit extreme, but she's also slamming face-first into accepting the fact that she's very different and always will be, no matter how much she wants to fit in.
Celsius is probably going to be the best thing for her in this - someone who knows her, accepts her, and can be there for her as she is.
Ouch. Reality hit hard
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They're drinking buddies. They get drunk and complain about their daily life. There will be more insight later on.
damn,talk about reality crashing around you
Well...shit. There go my feels.
Interesting developments here. I have to wonder how this will change her interactions with ponies in general, and with individual ponies specifically, such as Applejack and Berry Punch.
Most humans would not take being shoved about and threatened as they did very well.
OH COME THE FUCK ON!
I JUST CLOSED THESE FLOODGATES, DAMMIT! NOW THE FEELS ARE BACK!?
5482847 *Starts filling sandbags*
I still must wonder, as she recovers, how will she interact with the ponies when she is no longer trying to be like a pony?
Twi, you are ludicrous
(Insert Spaceballs Ludicrous speed meme)
Good way to show middle finger to a reader.
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It's a side project. Get over it.
5481858 Well, I hope that insight explains it, because as it stands, it's a pretty big inconsistency. All things considered, it really makes no sense that Applejack wouldn't have told her at least some of it.
well, no better pony than twilight to help make her feel better.
Well, maybe fluttershy more than twi, but twi's the one we're going with.
Also, twi, was comparing hr to gilda really the best move. Yes, i know your reason, but while zecora turned out to be nice, gilda was a self centred bitch. don't compare someone who has a mental problem they didn't even know about to a bitch like that.
That's one of the big secrets of humans - we always want to be accepted in the group (or 'the herd', as Twilight would think of it). Sometimes that makes us act out of character.
I do hope that this doesn't make Melody doubt her feelings for Celsius because I think that they're genuine enough. However, we mustn't forget that Equestria is a land of magic. If Melody wanted to be a mare enough, then Magic may have granted her a little bit of her wish and made it possible for her to conceive a foal.
Aside from the clop, this chapter was excellent! The physiological profile was just exquisite in the execution and the internal monologing was also done very well! Bravo! Maybe a bit less clop and more of this and you might even get featured.
Every time a human has an existential meltdown I have to remind myself that these humans aren't me. If someone were to tell me that I was culture appropriating in this scenario I would just be like 'uh duh'.
I wont retread the many positive comments regarding the psychological analysis aspects of this chapter (though i do concur!) and will instead just say that this:
...is one of the most adorable things i have ever read
Melody's realization here is really well written. It really makes sense that that would happen, and it's something not a lot of authors would pick up on.
7727137 err, yes.
Starting with the assumption that most people are not just trying to fit in.