I'm a human, the only one that is, living on a world full of ponies and I'm trying to make the best of it. But something happened that I thought impossible. I got pregnant.
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omg this was...awsome
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What you did there.
I see it.
More sex to sex the sex plez. Good chapter to . :D
God chapter, now I wait the two weeks until you release the next one.
Good chapter! The clop was pretty good.
nice chapter, and the clop was great
I'm pretty sure that there's more to an adult relationship than sex, no matter how mind-blowingly good it is. Does she even like Celsius? Heck, does she even know him beyond the fact she picked him up in Berry's bar?
Good chapter, nice clop, fairly well written.
Now the relationship building starts! As well the whole fact that she is still pregnate >_>
This is a great story.
One thing to nitpick though.
We stayed in that position for a while longer. No speaking, just kissing and nuzzling while his penis slowly receded into his shaft.
A penis will retract into a sheath.
This story in interesting, although sadly the main character's only interesting side is her sex life. Still getting an intimate view of that is nice. I wonder why where are so few human women in Equestria stories. It seems a more sensible pairing to me.
Personally, I was hoping for more sexual tension with Twilight Sparkle as I don't really like OC romantic partners, but that's just me.
You need character building, STAT, if you intend to take this story much longer. We need a much better picture of our protagonist.
Other than that it's something that you don't see much in the fandom, which is always a plus.
Even though I am faintly new to this site ( I have been reading random stuff for 4? Hours ), I think I like this one the best.
Knew that would make me uncomfortable, but I can tell this is the right stallion for melody.
... ANd now that I say that out loud it sounds weird, but, whatever.
Oi. I don't much like clop but this was not as bad as the first couple of chapters.
This was a very good chapter.
I specially like the fact that not only did Celsius enjoyed the new experience. our dear human friend had new sensations as well.
This was a good sign of just how good of a writer he became this is my first time reading this I don't know how old this is compared to the other story I've been paying attention to by truekry (journey) I don't know when the most recent chapter of that came up either but comparatively it got better