Button Mash has been friends with Sweetie Belle for a few months now. As their friendship progressed, so did his feelings for her. Now Button feels that it's time to tell her how he feels. But will it go the way he hopes it will?
*If you like the story, please leave a like and favorite it of you really do and if you don't, please state why in the comments.
**Please point out any spelling or grammatical errors.
***If anyone is willing to help me find a new cover it would be most appreciated.
Chapters (1)
Good story, a little 'slice of life' that I have not seen before, and why does everybody name their complete story chapters, chapter 1? it's not like that number will go anywhere...
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I couldn't think of anything better
Just like the title.
It's okay.
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Thanks for giving it a chance!
4283297 Aww, now you're making me feel guilty because the story is actually really bad. Consider rewriting it.
4282505 No the titles fine, that was just me talking to myself, so sorry
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If you wouldn't mind, could you tell me what you believe I should improve on?
EDIT
Or you know, be a total asshole by shitting on my story and not tell me how I could improve on it.
Hey good job man, i really enjoyed reading this.
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Thanks!
This was a wonderful and heart warming story, I might try to animate it, if I have your blessing of course!
Good one shot . I wish it was more than that because it has lots of potential. I give it a 8.4 out of 10.0.
Ive only read the first paragraph. Im so sad.
Okay, please please please please please please please please please please please please please please make a sequel to this. I really want one. This was so good I think it needs a sequel. I would rate it better if you either changed the ending or( as a pleadingly begged) make a sequel. Something about Sweetie Belle and Button advancing in there relationship. 9.5/10
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Thanks for reading it!
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I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't planning on making a sequel and I don't plan to change the ending. Besides, a 9.5 out of 10 is pretty good
It's possible that I may write a sequel but it depends on whether people who took the time to read and like this story would want one and it also depends on whether I could think of an idea on how a sequel would go.
Thank you for thinking about and reading my comment. I'll check out some of your other stories because I personally like the way you write.
I need to know which anime this is based on!!!!!
BTW, in my opinion, if you ever did a sequel, I might, just for once, want to see a diamondmash (buttontiara?) shipfic.
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The story is not based on the manga entirely, but it is is inspired by certain events that take place in it. Here's a clue about the manga, it has three word in its title and one of the words is "Master".
You'll be in for a shock when you find out what it is.
I need a sequel for this
So Sweetie stayed with Rumble, well, I think that was the right thing to happen in this fic, and if you make a sequel, I can't believe I'm saying this but, I'll like to see button shipped with Diamond Tiara
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I'm very much glad you enjoyed the story!
I may or may not come up with a sequel. It depends on the demand for one and whether I would be able to think of an idea.
My OTP..... If you have seen me and my ButtonBelle, you know I mean business when I say they should somehow get together...
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I'm sorry but that's not how the story will go down.
4388332 you think I'm bluffing, don't you? I'm not.
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Well neither am I.
4388529 darn. Well, it's still against my unbreakable otp. Gunna have to dislike. Sorry, man.
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Wow.
4391011 what? Considering ButtonBelle brought me to FimFiction, and Button Mash was the reason I'm a brony, I feel that it is right to have my opinions.
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I don't have a problem with you having your own opinion.The problem I am having is, what was the point of you even giving a like in the first place? You should have just disliked it in the first place and left rather than like it, have a conversation with me about how I should have made it so that the two got together on my own story, then dislike it because I told you that I didn't want it to end up that way.
4392438 because at first I thought I had a little influence. But I see now this is not so. Bye.
I can make a new cover art for you if you'd like
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Thanks for the offer! But I would rather not waste someone's time just for my sake. I really do appreciate the offer though! Also, thanks for the favourite!
There r gramer errors, but today the gramer nazi in me isnt there and im sure you can find them
I think that cover art is just fine
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A grammar nazi in you?
I doubt it.
And what errors?
If I was Button, I'd give Sweetie and Rumble the ol' "Riley Freeman Fuck-You Speech"
(When I start) yes I could use a buttonbell fic right now
(After I red it) dang it dimond
ok, what manga is this one-shot based of off? I just want the title, no hints
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It's "Onani (Masturbation) Master Kurosawa". As you can see from the title itself, it's an adult manga (Not porn) which I took elements from. It's a highschool drama/slice of life with bits of romance. There's some partial nudity but and suggestive things but nothing that goes too far.
Action + Action + more action = No drama
That is how I do