Inspired by “The Herohood of the Traveling PipBuck” Good Soldier, a ghoul pony of the Equestrian Wasteland, falls asleep one night. When a 'time reality tear' opens up and swallows him like a sink hole. He awakes just outside Ponyville, Equestria. Only in this Equestria the war with the zebras never happen.
I like it. Delusions of grandeur is something that I like seeing in character that live in such a world. A lone pony trying to force himself to see good. Thats a good plot device. Now what I could not stand though was the lack of editing. I really really like this story but the lack of spell and grammar check is bugging me. I'm sorry. Props to the story for helping me with mine, but I really would like to see the end of this.
I got stories stuck in my head, but I suck at spelling and grammar. The worst part is, that I keep going over book after book on how to improve my writing skills, but it will not sink in.
please I'm dying
please read what you have written at least once...
Using the base form of a verb in any Latin derived language is almost always a bad idea. (Except the infinitive, to check, to hug, etc)
oh just search for "form" and make sure it shouldn't be from already.
It's O.K. if you have bad spelling and grammar. It's just hard work for us to find all the mistakes, so try to do them less if you can.
4174251 I know I made those changes.
No spelling errors so far! No, seriously.
Oh, OK "leason" is a spelling error.
Yeah I'm getting bored of correcting...
4174281 Note to self. Do not forget to press "Save".