• Member Since 5th Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen Dec 26th, 2020

Russell Dickson


I am Russell Dickson. I live and work in Maysville, KY with my family at Magee's Bakery. I like to write stories form time to time and thought I would try MLP

T

Inspired by “The Herohood of the Traveling PipBuck” Good Soldier, a ghoul pony of the Equestrian Wasteland, falls asleep one night. When a 'time reality tear' opens up and swallows him like a sink hole. He awakes just outside Ponyville, Equestria. Only in this Equestria the war with the zebras never happen.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

I like it. Delusions of grandeur is something that I like seeing in character that live in such a world. A lone pony trying to force himself to see good. Thats a good plot device. Now what I could not stand though was the lack of editing. I really really like this story but the lack of spell and grammar check is bugging me. I'm sorry. Props to the story for helping me with mine, but I really would like to see the end of this.

I got stories stuck in my head, but I suck at spelling and grammar. The worst part is, that I keep going over book after book on how to improve my writing skills, but it will not sink in.

The thread one was Good Soldiers meal for the day.

“Zebra stated this war, and we will end them!” Another C.O. form another time.

But, the officers had me kill cots. Young cots, why,

please I'm dying :rainbowlaugh:

“That is the fastest I have ever ??? use my sonic screwdriver.”

Time Turn reached over and pull the pin on the grenade.

please read what you have written at least once...

Time Turner hug the ghoul pony

Nurse Redheart check the ghoul pony over.

the war never happen.

Using the base form of a verb in any Latin derived language is almost always a bad idea. (Except the infinitive, to check, to hug, etc)

form your reality into mine.

oh just search for "form" and make sure it shouldn't be from already.

It's O.K. if you have bad spelling and grammar. It's just hard work for us to find all the mistakes, so try to do them less if you can.

“We are coming for you. Do not resets.”

“You are going to fast.

Your heart is sobbing with grate pain. With this grate sobbing

No spelling errors so far! No, seriously.

“DON’T LEASON TO THEM!” Came a vice from the dark mist.

Oh, OK "leason" is a spelling error.

We are hear to help.

Yeah I'm getting bored of correcting...

LIE!” The monster machine pony lower and ready his weapon.

4174281 Note to self. Do not forget to press "Save".:facehoof:

Login or register to comment