as mythed if

as miffed if

You squirm slightly but her one of her strong arms as a vice grip over your chest, preventing you from escaping

..what? Did you mean something like;
You squirm slightly but one of her strong arms acts as a vice grip over your chest, preventing you from escaping

Coming in here along and vulnerable

Coming in here alone and vulnerable

so you simple roll your slightly on your mounds and drool slightly.

...I got nothing on that one, but it's not right,

You mead and squeeze

Mead? KNEAD.

And there we have it, sex with her at last! Can't wait for the next training session!

4531693 every time

awesome very well written

Do "The king and i" fic.

Awesome chapter once again, though I'm pretty sure that the chair changed from metal to wood. I swear, it's those damn alchemist messing with the stories again....

And so it begins...
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What does "tko" mean?

4535354 technical knock out

4535530 Ah, thanks.

Hey, I wouldn't mind if Gilda did that to me.

I wish Brad wasn't in this story

4537522 I agree

Also
“Do it kid, breed me like the bitch I am!”
Looks like we just discovered one of Gilda's fetishes, better than the sweaty feet story by a mile.

When may we have more?

4755697 i agree when is the next update?

4856278 To be honest I don't have a schedule for releasing chapters for this story. I'll think about it after I write another chapter for the king and I. ;D

4856506 thanks ill keep an eye out for the next chapter for that story then.

Whoa, whoa, whoa, hold on. Completed?! When did this happen? I've been waiting for this to update for months now! This was one of the few great Gilda clopfics on this site and its already done. Seriously, the ending felt like there was going to be more.

I can understand if you feel like there's no more to be done for the fic, but it's just a bit disappointing that there wont be any more updates to it.

5285327 I have another chapter hidden somewhere on my HD, waiting to be finished. In it's current state I consider the story kind of complete, but I'm going to hunker down and get it done proper soon.

5285332 Oh good. Please find it and continue the story when you can.

This was really good, but you should pay a bit more attention to the pace of the story.
One minute she's scared of the protagonist blackmailing her and ten seconds later she pounces on him.
Either add a bit more context between certain scenes, or more character interactions.
Keep up the good work

Bonus chapter?