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I'm a pony of many words.

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Thats my life in one story

Thumbs up to you friend.

>"I don’t want to end the night on regret."
>Cheats on fiance before their wedding
I don't think he thought that one through. Good clop though.



Someone call the police! This fine bandit has derailed my story!

Ruxen #4 · Mar 24th, 2012 · · 2 ·

Glaze should clearly remain Shining's colt on the side.

Hell Shining should just drop everything and go with Glaze.


In seriousness - The story was good, the plot was semi-believable and the writing was solid. The only flaw I can point out is it sometimes becomes a tad muddled to follow with the repetative usage of the names, a sudden shift after seeing the same name for so long can throw someone off quite easily. Your descriptions at some points were a bit confusing as well and required me to reread it a few times to understand it fully.

Other than that this is a solid fic, well done!

Great work, man. EqD can suck it, because I love your dialogue. Already read this one three times, and I'm sure I'll give it another peek this weekend.

:raritycry: Poor Glaze! Why you gotta make such a bitter sweet ending! Seriously, I loved it.


Fair enough. I only read over this piece once before I submitted it myself. It's not my best work, but I needed to write it to express something so I could move on with my life.

Jokes on you, I already have that album. :pinkiecrazy:


Eh, Cadence is probably having just as much fun with her maid of honor :duck:

Anyway, back to the author: I was just wondering about this: "and he remembered all too well when his friend held him and his crying form after the unicorn came out to his parents and their response was less than thrilled."

I'm confused, because Shining seemed to be unaware of his bisexuality until this night, why he would have come out to his parents years ago?


"He’d always considered himself open but he’d never…" I think he was bisexual but never really tried it with another stallion. So in a sense, it was his first time.

To the author: Brilliant story and even better clop :raritywink: The storyline was....depressing :raritycry: Why glaze why?! Can't wait to see more from you now

Damn you! This fic is so fucking sad:raritycry:

You should write an alternate ending. Shining finding out he loves Glaze instead. PLEASE DO IT!

Oh my God, slap Dapples, he recced this fic to me and it BROKE MY HEART INTO A MILLION BITTY PIECES!!!! :raritycry:
Well written and it had really clever dialogue and I thought your descriptions were hot and not cheesy (which is tough to do, so props!)

This is a really good story...i feel bad for Glaze but well there's nothing he can do

Still....FUKING AWSOME :pinkiehappy:

Awww. Here's hoping Cadance lets Shiny off the hook a few nights. :ajsmug:

I enjoyed this on a number of levels. I'd love to see more Glaze come out of you.

...and that was totally innuendo, wasn't it. :raritydespair:

Read this a while ago and loved it. Loved it just as much now. :ajsmug:

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