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Osper
I'm a simple writer. I write whatever I feel like at the moment and I don't stick to any one genre very much. I just want to entertain with my work.
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I don't know why this has relatively so many dislikes, this is good. You need to work on some grammar but the story was well-written and enjoyable. The grammar, by the way, was the lack of "its". Whenever you use "it's" possessively rather than as a contraction, use "its" instead. For example,
should have "its" instead of "it's".
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Thanks, I don't know why I missed something I think I know, even if I do play pretty fast and loose with proper grammar. I'll go back and Ctrl + F my way through to check again.
And I dunno. Maybe the world is tired of stallion loving Macintosh? Thanks for reading all the same
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It may be because it's OC X canon.
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It might be that people think Promontory is an OC. He actually appears in the episode Over a Barrel as one of the Train Pulling stallions. I wouldn't know he existed if a friend of mine hadn't fallen in love with him.
http://mylittlebrony.wikia.com/wiki/Promontory
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I think a background pony isn't seen as much better. Your point is also true.
I don't know why or how this happened but this is now maybe my favorite story I've EVER read, and I've read hundreds. I think what I love the most about this story is how emotionally attached I got to the two characters. Yea, there were a few grammer errors but, the detail and description astonished me. Bravo, good sir, I give it a 9/10 due to grammer errors but still an excellent story.
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Thank you very much! That's quite a big statement and I'm proud to have made such an impact on you.
I suppose grammar is one of my weak points, next to writing endings, but I do my best.
Here I was just wanting something to wank to, but then you go and wank on my heart strings.
Thank you for such a beautiful story.
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That is one of the best responses to a story I've ever gotten
Thanks for giving it a read.
3514955 It was better than just clop, it is a lovely tale. Would wish for the adventures of the train pony (can't really remember or spell his name), but the mystery of what happens is nice.
...I've never read a clop that made me feel sad before. Well, maybe not sad. Contemplative and melancholy, really.
This was really cute! At times the scenes felt a little rushed and I had to parse the dialogue a little to tell who was saying what, but I really enjoyed it.