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Why? Why're you toying with my emotions like this!
An absolutely brilliant read. I had my heart in my throat and tears in my eyes for the majority of the story.
All I can desperately hope for is that Shale doesn't go through with it and elopes with Cliff.
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I'd say I'm a sadist and making you miserable is just what I do, but wow wouldn't that just be awful? In reality this story was more projecting my own emotions into something positive. I play all of my stories pretty close to the chest when I can. And I won't say what ended up happening. You can have whichever ending you want.
I feel like I just saw a puppy chew a baby's heart out and then get ran over by a truck! This was so earth-oblideratingly brilliant yet so pain-stakingly tear jerking! I was legitimately holding back tears at one point. My friend referred this story me me, hesitantly. Our opinions are basically the same: We love the story but that last line. That. Last. Line. My soul was crushed. Bravo sir, an incredibly moving fic which called forth every emotion the human heart can muster. This is written gold.
Oh sweet Jesus, this. I haven't felt this sad since My Little Dashie. It feels like I just watched a puppy get curb-stomped. You are a terrific writer, and I cannot wait to see more. I hope that Cliff could talk to Sandy, and ask if she could just help him get Scootaloo, and then elope with Shale.
I did like this. The only thing I wasn't too thrilled about is Nimbus abandoning her daughter. I know someone who got pregnant from being raped and she loves her daughter very much. Plus, there is a biological link between the mother and the child formed during pregnancy. I find it very hard to believe that a link like that could be broken so easily, which is how it came across to me. But, then again I could be wrong because I'm neither a parent nor a woman.
Very well written. Please do a sequel.