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TheInvincibleIronBrony
Just a fan of Marvel, Ponies and pretty much anything Rooster Teeth. I had ideas for stories and started putting them into my harddrive. Don't be afraid to tell me what you think of my stories. IB out
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Well , it seemed interesting enough , but I hope that by the end Fluttershy will be a better drawn out character. But hey I liked it for the most part , but the fact that you used everyone and everypony , I think you should just stick to one of them. Any way , you get one like and one fav , I really think that with some work you can make this a masterpiece
3914946 Yeah, kinda felt like I dropped the balk with Flutters, but when I first had the chapter finished, her scenes weren't even in there, and I was like 'oh crap, we need some Shy time' . Anyways I couldn't think of anything else to put in that didn't seem forced. I will work on her in the future, but the next chapter or two will concentrate on Rarity. Depends how lengthy it gets. And thanks for reading, I hope to keep you interested.
I'm really enjoying this so far. You always write the family dynamic really well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
4691550 Hmm.. that's good to know. There's going to be a lot of family themed elements in these stories.
Pinkie goes looking for the Apples? That's pretty table different isn't it?
4787884 No not exactly. Pinkie will bring her usual unusual style to the party none the less.
Will aj be next
5708029 I hope so. I want to see how she fits into her family.
Or if she doesn't, and hates what they are.
5708029 Yes, AJ is next on my list.
5708394 I'm not really sure how much I can say before I've said too much, so I'll just say she is at odds with her family.
5709175 You don't have to say anything else. The fact that you said that she's at odds with her family is enough for me.
And I'm glad to hear the her chapter is next.
5709239 It's all part of the plan. Unfortunately I'm starting to realize that, past the next two or three chapters, I don't really have much of a plan. Oh dear.
5709315 Cool.
As to that last bit, not so cool.
Well, I'm sure that you'll figure it all out. I have faith in you.
5709385 Thanks. I'll do what I can
5709395 You're very welcome, hon.
And that's all any of us can do.