Just a fan of Marvel, Ponies and pretty much anything Rooster Teeth. I had ideas for stories and started putting them into my harddrive. Don't be afraid to tell me what you think of my stories. IB out
This story is a sequel to MLPU: The Invincible Iron Mare
Caramel is a simple stallion. He has simple tastes and doesn't own anything extravagant. The most adventerous thing he ever did was ask out his boss Rainbow Dash, a.k.a. Iron Mare. Needless to say he's nervous about being up to snuff with the models and movie stars she's been with before. Can Caramel keep himself together or will he will he crash and burn before the date even starts?
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That was funny. Great job.
3835469 Thanks man, can't say a lot of effort was put in though. Just something I wrote in like an hour.
I'll read it when that word is correct.
3835848 Fair enough.
I'm weird pointing these out
I liked it. Quite short but still good.
3837932thank you for pointing out the mistakes it was kind of mean to be short and thank you for the favorite sir
3838760 I don't think it was mean to be short. Sometimes short is better. Short, sweet and to the point sometimes makes the nicest stories.
3841671 Meant, it was Meant to be short. My bad.
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At this point I feel like I'm just being a jerk so I'll stop. I tend to pick up on the little things that don't matter. I apologize.
3842090 Don't feel bad. Nitpicking like this is how a goodstory gets to be goodlooking. I appreciate the help. seriously.
Those Iron Man references though >_<
3842330 thanks?
God that was funny. Not only this is going to my "Romance" shelf, but also my "Comedy" one too!
Maybe you should tag the story as comedy? Eh, maybe not so that the funny parts aren't spoiled.
Either way that was really awesome!
Ps- I like your profile pic!
7215158 Thank you on all counts