Like a lot of pieces off fimfiction I'm going to give this a chance. It's to soon to really make a judgment so try your best.

Who names their kid after a type of sword? Poor khopesh XD

What the fuck does he look like again?

5380966 ah thank you

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This story is dead I really liked this tho

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If not for the short chapters i would have considered this story great. But because there are not many chapters, the unfortunate fact is that i am forced to judge it then based on the number of words in each chapter...And it doesn't look too good. The story, itself, is actually rather intriguing, but there is just the matter of ''more''. I NEED MORE!

4860295 who names a kid like? In equestria?

I like the setting and doesnt look like its going to dissappoint

hi i like the story but what is the he/she going to do and is he/she going to fall in love with anypony?

and another dead story...

oi do more chapters

hay do more chapters

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I just got back into writing, and while I have another primary project I may return to A Set Of Snakes. We shall see, thank you for your interest.

This kind of story verse is obsolete, we Authors use displaced these days.