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MelodyMori
Just another forest girl writing stories.
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What's up with the ending? There's a bunch of broken sentences. Also, m rn m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m rn m m m m m m m m m m rn m m m m m. Find the 3 non-ms!
#2/21/31 are not ms
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Apparently comments on docs can also go onto the chapter when uploaded....
Well, at least I know that now, so it can't happen again.
Like a lot of pieces off fimfiction I'm going to give this a chance. It's to soon to really make a judgment so try your best.
He wanted to be a Space Marine? And when he was told no his immediate response WASNT Chaos Space Marine?! What a Casul ._.
Can't some snakes change sex at will? Or is that amphibians? Or does it not matter as he's a magical snake person XD
Who names their kid after a type of sword? Poor khopesh XD
What the fuck does he look like again?
4860275 While it's been a while since you posted this comment, that only happens with clownfish and some forms of toad. Primarily in the interest of preserving breeding possibilities when there are too many of one sex for genetic diversity, evolutions grab bag, to be maintained. When it does happen, some thing about the environment forced it to occur.
5380966 ah thank you
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At the begging with the sand stuff this was my response: I tell you what is happening it is the birth of the Sandman!
Also look another fiction where the main character is gender swap. Sure it adds drama, but is the species he has become have only female members? At least he didn't say to be a fungus monster because fungus have over 36,000 different genders.
This story is dead I really liked this tho
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If not for the short chapters i would have considered this story great. But because there are not many chapters, the unfortunate fact is that i am forced to judge it then based on the number of words in each chapter...And it doesn't look too good. The story, itself, is actually rather intriguing, but there is just the matter of ''more''. I NEED MORE!
4860295 who names a kid like? In equestria?
I like the setting and doesnt look like its going to dissappoint
hi i like the story but what is the he/she going to do and is he/she going to fall in love with anypony?
and another dead story...
oi do more chapters
He made the mistake of not asking for a power with his new form. Like he could've ask for a male snake person body with the power of the endlessly evolving slime.
He also made the mistake of not asking for specifics such as the gender. Like asking for a male snake body for all he knows is new bodies female.
And he duped for not saying specifics.
P.s. Ha that is what you get for not thinking of possible outcomes, and not making specific choices in what you say so that things like this won't happen.
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Also he was well now she Wasn't idiot for not trying to fight back such as grabbing the collar out of the air, and scratching one of their faces off.
When someone tries to force something upon you. You're flight or fight instincts should activate in the case that you can't to run away, then you fight until you got them die. At least take some of them with you.
hay do more chapters
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I just got back into writing, and while I have another primary project I may return to A Set Of Snakes. We shall see, thank you for your interest.
This kind of story verse is obsolete, we Authors use displaced these days.