A story I've been wanting to write for a good while now. Also, experimenting with small chapters so expect a quick read. The first five chapters are just funniness until the actual story.
In an unfortunate turn of events, Pinkie Pie gets sick. The illness itself is not the problem. It's the fact Pinkie had some party planning to do. Her friends decide it shouldn't be too hard to help her out. It's only a party, right?
Features a couple of OCs and Discord for good measure. It's an adventure into what do party planners do?
Chapters (11)
I like it, but you really need to have longer chapters.
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I was trying something new with the shorter chapters. I'll make future ones longer.
Cool. I look forward to it!
One down, two to go. Hahaha, I loved Rainbow Dash's reactions to kids
Hahahaha, when she throws up on him, I remember of the Pony.mov's Spike going all like "Oh my God... IT GOT IN MY MOUTH!"
There was so much chaos that I am surprised Discord didn't show up. On to the next party.
Mental note: do NOT let Discord play lifeguard and do NOT leave him in charge of the cake.
can't wait for the continu!
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How much did you like my poorly written song?
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It was hilarius!
Okay. What just happened? When did we meet Grey Faerie before now?
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Sorry, she's my OC who pops up every now and again. She's mainly just to help the plot line continue on or to give info on something. A sort of 'deus ex machina' of plot saving. I threw her in for fun.
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It's also a bit of a fourth wall joke as she's me and I'm the writer.
4256962 I was curious because I was wondering why Twilight and company already knew who Grey was. Stories with OCs that canon characters already know that the reader hasn't met before with no explanation does bother me a bit.
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Yeah, I usually have a sort of 'who's grey?' moment in there but it didn't fit with my fourth wall joke about the song.
finally, a new chapter! I've been waiting sooo long for this!
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Sorry about that. I've finally started to get back into the swing to finish it. I do have part of the next chapter written up.
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It's ok!
Yay!
" "I! The Great and Power Trixie have made it my personal mission to whip my green horn assistant into shape in record time." ", " "It has! You seems to different now." ", " A griffin opened the door, narrowing missing being hit by Pinkie." - Typos there, otherwise, awesome as you usually do
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Fixed it!
Okay. I'm confused. Who are these ponies and how come this is the first time of me reading about them, yet all the ponies seem to know them?
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Sorry, I've been out of sorts lately and it's affecting my writing.
I mean to clarify things more. It's simply that Pinkie has told the girls about Naty and Lalu. They're the ones she's planning the carnival for an with the girls taking over, Pinkie has told them all about the clients. Also, Grey and the Cakes have already met them before.
Finally Got time to read this, and I love it!
The ending makes me laugh
Pinkie is smartest pony