At first glance, Twilight Sparkle is a rather plain, ordinary looking mare who became a princess recently. She has very few free time to hang with her five friends. One day, after twilight got back from her one week princess training camp she is approached by her best friend Rarity, who wants nothing more but for twilight to hang out with her all day. After a mane pin and some fashion tips Twilight starts to develop feelings that are more than just "friends."
this fimfic is based on a manga called Girlfriends
Chapters (1)
Um, dude, that manga is nsfw. Trust me, I read it.
Based on Girlfriends? That disappoint me because now I know how it will end.
3908305 Hold on how is it NSFW? It's 'Mature' not 'Ecchi' there's a big difference.
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Mature is still nsfw, sorry. Same reason you can't link mature stories on-site, even if it isn't clop.
Fuck you cunt
3908456 Please I've seen worse and at least give the story a decent chance before making judgment.
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I read Girlfriends and liked it. But you can't link it here because it is mature.
As in there are naked girls in the manga.
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rood.
3908528 Get over it, until the admins actually tells her to either remove the link or they delete the story there's nothing you can do. So I suggest cooling off okay?
3908602 I'm trying to be nice and help a guy before he gets reported. You're the one getting angry. I loved Girlfriends and this story probably isn't bad.
3908627 (Eye roll) Sure you are.
3908650 The site rules explicitly say that nsfw content cannot be linked. Mature is nsfw. I warned the guy. How am I being a jerk? I could've said nothing and just reported the story. I take the risk of people like you calling me out for trying to be helpful.
3908677 And yet you're doing the same thing? Isn't that a bit hypocritical?
3908688 Doing what? Explaining my position? There's some ambiguity of the rules, so people point it out (like now). I just don't appreciate the fact you were being rude about it and assuming I didn't like the story.
I never once said anything rude like this. So please, leave me alone.
Also, mister author? Thanks for taking the link down. Shot you a like, so keep writing!
3908712 Look all I'm saying is that you're blowing things out of proportion.
3908724 Actually, no I wasn't. Because a mod made sure the link got taken down. I know what I was talking about. I was looking out for the guy, alright?
Because I LOVE RARITWI!
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3908739 Really? Look I love shipping as much as the next guy but this is taking it a bit far don't you think? Besides Sunlight is best ship.
3908752 I always look out for a fellow shipper.
Anyway, I'm done spamming this poor guy's story. If you want to argue/debate/chat anymore, take it to PM. Otherwise, more RariTwi:
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Fuck you you stupid fucking piece of shit. I hope you fucking drown in horse cum you stupid horsefucker
3908830 Relax man. Jesus.
Would u guys like it better if i wrote a complete original shipping fic?
For those who is wondering why my fic is on hold, it's because i'm going to do one shots first and see how that goes, before continuing this or another one
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Well, aren't you just a ray of sunshine
3909624
One shots are always fun, but make sure to come back to this story because RariTwi is the
2ndbest shipAre you going to use my edited version?
Yes i am 3913224
3913847 Okay, I looked at the story. The only problem I have is your structure. Try indenting paragraphs and putting a line, a blank space, between them. Also, each voice should get their own line. I'll show you.
I wrote a really short story that shows you how it works. Even without that many words, do this.
So, between paragraphs, put a blank line. Indent before paragraphs. Start a new line when a different pony talks. Also, it might be beneficial to read the Writing guide here on FimFiction.
3915305 Wait, is your example supporting slavery?
Now I'm going to be honest Ponywubs, I have no clue about this manga, but I do want to offer this advise: You're basically translating something from a visual format to a literary one. Make sure you slow down and describe things then, as too not let your mental picture just blunder you through a scene. That a mistake a lot of authors make when transcribing something from visual to literary, myself included.
3931357 What? No! I didn't actually have a clue why Spike was sad, even while I was writing it.
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Haven't you ever heard of the Emancipation Proclamation?!
Spike, you know I don't listen to Hip Hop.
3934071 I've heard of it, but I'm honestly not sure what it is.
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Wait, honestly? Here, try this link out.
3936249 Oh, that's what that is! I'm still in school, middle school, and we haven't gotten to that point in history yet!
hey guys! im kinda new here, would someone tell me what "on hiatus" means? Is it like, the author is wondering wether or not to continue?
i hope he/she does because this could turn out wonderful!
3963002 Hiatus means a few things. But, to give a general answer, the writing process is paused. That may be because they don't have time, or because they don't want to write it anymore, or because they can't think of any ideas etc. Either way, this story is on a break, so it may or may not continue. But, even if it does, it will most likely not continue for a long time because the status was changed to hiatus. Sadly, that usually leads to a cancellation, so this story may never continue. It's up to the author and how they're feeling.
4158425 Thanks Brah!
4161614 You're welcome!
I've just read Girl Friends, and I loved it! But the ending left me kinda restless... I wanted to see a grown-up Akko!
(I blame my mind... 
)
The fic is kinda hard to judge due to the fact we only have such a little piece of it, but I do feel like this story actually has some similarities with Romance Reports!
(With the obvious exceptions of the extensive sex, and the fact that this is a "Not quite Rarilight yet" and not a "TwiLuna. Kind of..." 
)
For instance, how the one-night stand (?) between Twilight and Braeburn was kinda similar to Mari's and Harada's relationship.
I was really interested in knowing how you had done it with this story...
Considering the in-verse setting to be just after Season 3, I take it would be based on their second year... (Vol. 2++)
One of the joys of a character-driven crossover is figuring out the casting.
I had some stray thoughts trying at that; Mari and Akko were set by default, (I don't think they could have been anyone else, tho') at first I thought Tamamin and Sugi-san would be good as Flutters and RD, and that Kuno-chan made a nice Pinkie, but as the story progressed, Tamamin appeared to be as good of a Pinkie, and Sugi-san was more like AJ...
~ChocoLatte
Moar please.
7462133 i'll see i have other stories i'm working on.
7463938 yay!! Hopefully....
Will this story be updated?
7463938
So....is this story dead, or.... what?