It has been a long time since Twilight first became a princess. The Mane Six have each gotten to their ultimate goals: to succeed in their way of life. As Celestia and Twilight are scouting out a new land under Twilight's rule, however, the Element of Magic decides to write back to an old friend she's been out-of-touch with for far too long…
Letters from a New Land is a compilation of letters between Princess Twilight Sparkle and her faithful companion, Spike, as she tries to learn as much as she can about her new land.
Chapters (1)
Awesome. Are you going to continue with this or...
-Clay the Draconequus
3787579 No, I'm going to leave it like it is. I don't have any other ideas for it.
Besides, I wouldn't want to tarnish it my making an unneeded sequel/add-on. It's the best the way it is.
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Al'ight. I'm surprised this isn't more popular to be honest, its really good.
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You should really share this aroundI'm not fucking kiddingWell, I've actually notices a harsh decline in story views since I joined two-and-a-half years ago. My stories from back then have tons of views, while mine right now have little.My friend speculated it's because I don't update anything.
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Grammar score out of 10: 9
Pros :
it was excellently written
I could hear the characters' voices in my head
The ending was unexpected and brilliant.
The was you eased into 'operite is evil' was amazing.
Cons (list three cons)
There was one grammar issue
Too short (Though that's not really a problem).
Notes Section
"Week's" Is a typo. That meakes it seem like one week. The possessive plural would be "Weeks', with the apostrophe after the 's'.
You did better than most of the fics on this site, grammatically speaking.
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