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ThatRandomDepressedPony



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As something horrible happens in Equestria to Vinyl Scratch she gets teleported to Earth,causing Mason to instead realize how good life can be!

Note this is my very first fanfiction and so it won't be very good but when i'm done with it i plan on redoing it along with a sequel.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 31 )

Holy shit this is the second MLD rip off I've seen today!

Suicide is not a plot device.

338610 I was just trying what i thought i might be able to do best and this is my very first fan fiction. but if you don't like it because it's a MLD rip off then that's your opinion but if you don't like MLD rip offs then why did you start reading this in the first place it is called "My Little Pon-3"

338619 oh sorry i kinda forgot to change that.... heh.

338620 I dunno dude... I mean... I hate it when people can't think of original ideas and they have to rip their stories off other popular stories. It just... it doesn't seem legit to me. I'm sorry. I just... snapped.

338639 hay no problem dude i can understand. This is my first so I though i might as well try something easy.

(haven't read it yet)
Basing off a story isn't a problem if the story is good in itself

Wall of text, kill it

that was good but why so short? over all good story keep it up, this is godofwar88 the fanficfim critic:moustache:

341363 thank you! And i'm still working on other chapters and also redoing the ones I already have done to fit the story more clearly and just overall better

339161 You can't kill something because it's a wall of text! :pinkiecrazy: Oh...Maybe Pinkie wants to. :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::facehoof::pinkiesad2:

352107 Mard meant, get rid of the wall of text and place paragraphs? o.o

Can't say how it's going, we will see in the future, although I feel the chapters are a lil short (that's a preference of mine)

Got my interest , a lil short but good taking the elements at disposition
Keep at it

365323 I'm not very good at writing long chapters, I mean i can but not very good at it. Also I kinda like the fact that I can write without having to use so many words!

Well, missed the chance but still a 50/50 shot, not bad, but not great.
I'll wait till next chapter to cast down my rating

PLZ have a happy ending :fluttercry:

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Even for a first try, This was very poor. Many grammatical errors.

Kill me. Now. The story line is to quick, AND COPIED >_<.

Decent enough, and I've only read the first chapter, just copy-pasted it to a word doc to read at my leasure, don't worry, I'll be bypassing any mention of grammar or spelling, as I believe a story should be rated on the merits of the story, not the particular language, per se. It should be a very minor roadblock to those reading, but if you like, I can offer my services as an editor. I've yet to have anyone accept, but if anything, I can get the spelling right for you on any future products. Just for the opportunity to see a piece before it's sent to the masses and a little credit for the corrections, naturally, are more than enough of a reward. :twilightsmile: consider it :)

You know what? This wasn't half bad. Sure, a little bit rushed, and more than a little corny, but I liked it, I think I'll even mention it in my up coming mailbag review. Keep an eye out for it. It was short and kinda sweet, and I like that you didn't try to keep up with robcakeran53's original work, but instead took it and made it all your own. I don't know if you plan on continuing this, but if you are, I wish you all the luck in the world on it. Oh, and those that complain about the grammar, shut up, you're making yourself look like idiots. Did you understand the ideas presented? Yes? Then stop bitching. Good day to you.

Smu

MOAR!!!:flutterrage: And With the quickness too...

Sorry everyone, no need to explain, just the need to get back to work... so... you should see some new content from me now!... again, I'm sorry, but all that matters it dat I'm back and ready to work some more!

Not bad actually. Figured it would be more of a rip off but I loved it!:pinkiesmile:

its good could have given more bild up but i liked it

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