I have obtained a message straight from Lyra Heartstrings. Let's say my beliefs of the My Little Pony franchise have been... Reinforced.
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EnderBlaze
I am EnderBlaze, story editor extraordinaire! However, I do still dabble in the fine art of story telling sometimes. Oh, and I also do dramatic story readings! :D
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Word, bro. Word. Liked and faved.
Faved and acknowledged
This was good. A few sentence structure errors, but, overall, was good. Liked, faved, and I think you just earned yourself a follow.
This is certainly something to think about.
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Thank you!
And this is why I will never write a story that leaves characters injured or depressed.
Like, fave and follow
There is one thing that this made me think about. What if it is the other way round and we were made from their imagination. all our dreams are made by them and everything that makes us sad was created by them. What if we are like Lyra and know of them while others call us weird but we are actually right. the only difference is that we are not entirly immune to it
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I actually had something of that effect in the story, but decided to remove it thinking it would makereligious people mad.
Strange thing is though, I can't find anything to disprove either the story or your theory :)
There are so many wonders of the world that we just don't know about...
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either way. I am never going to look at our world the same way again, and hopefully in a better way because of this
I loved it. makes me feel like they are real.
Wow...well, my dreams of Equestria tend to be centered around 2 things. One, is them living freely, not tied to any author or such things, and the scale of the conflicts, while larger in scale than the TV show, still have them coming out on top, and having the comfort and familiarity of home and loved ones intact. Granted, I cross over ALOT of stuff, but nothing lasting, and always for what I think is decent character building.
But, after reading this, I have to change the second thing. A world of Ponies...but one that is a near replicate of the show...except, more complete. All the little things, the little pleasures, the everyday life and times. And occasionally, I think I'll add in a dip into the artistic, like what we see in The MLP Comics with Big Mac's adventure. Something that uplifts with the oddity, but otherwise gives hope and comfort for everypony.
Well done my good sir, and indeed pass this story on.
...And for the record, I think a Pony's dreams should involve their OWN wishes...think any-Brony else feels the same hard enough?
"I am not saying that the negative is more probably,"
probable
"Our sadness hasn’t overcame our optimism because of you."
overcome
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Thank you, fixed!
Slow clap.
Slow, slow clap.
This is actually so well written, that I can imagine it placed in "Theory" category on Creepypasta Wiki. Great story
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Wow... Thank you so much!
Amazing just wow you are really good and I shall spread the message for thou
eh, the only reason why I favorite it is because of Lyra's faith in humanity.
Can I write a sequel to this you know another one-shot from the POV of Celestia.
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Hmm...
Taking in to account the legal restrictions of copyright, one can conclude that such means of reproduction and by objective standards 'soft parody'... Around the corner, through the loop... Carry the two...
*holds up seven fingers, then scrutinizes the eighth*
Yes!
Sorry, I couldn't resist.
But anyway, yes, you may. I encourage you to, even!
4639095 All right thanks
Dude, what if she really did contact you through your mind!? I want to see her because I believe they are real and that they will somehow be able to cross the barrier from our world to theirs. Hint hint, the one only Pinkie Pie sees. I mean, I could've sworn I saw her in the distance when I was leaving school today. Maybe she really is contractually inclined not to make contact with us!
It makes a brony sad i am crying as i post this
I'll be real, wasn't expecting to feel anything after that foreword.
But damn, that shit sounds horrible. And I already believed this anyway.
Guess I better get my ass in gear with that fun adventure story.
5224234 you don't want to meet these ponies. If you met one of us from where this letter is from, we would only ask "Why?" Why must you give us these nightmares, this horror, these horrible, twisted, convoluted fantasies? Rainbow dash has to live through every single one of those 'cupcake' fanfics, every appledash, every stinking war we decide to put her in! Pinkie pie is the worst off. Every night, she is forced to go literally insane, kill her friends, be forced to do so many... Despicable things....
6431440 Hey, I'm not like them, I'm messed up in the head too.
Example 1: I'm part werewolf.
Example 2: I've got Discord and Nightmare Moon and the leaders of the Darkness in Kingdom Hearts running around inside my head.
Example 3: I've got two hearts.
Example 4 following 3: I'm the son of Fluttershy and the Master.
Example 5: The Doctor trapped me here in human form.
Example 6: I am in constant contact with Princess Luna and the uncorrupted versions of the Elements of Harmony.
Example 7: I've been to Silent Ponyville and barely survived the nightmare.
Example 8: Pinkie, Alma Wade, and the Nightmare FM-ian version are following me around and the latter two are trying to kill or possess me on a regular basis.
Example 9: I can actually hit FM-Nightmare!
Now, tell me... Do I sound like I really don't belong?
6488320 you sound like a very bad liar. I asked, and Luna has no contact with anyone not here.
6496522 Well, then, how come I have two hearts, and for that matter, how am I able to produce voice-changing and voice-amplifying effects without the use of a electronic device!? Now, Luna might not remember me because the Doctor wiped me from existence in Equestria, and now you are my only link. You tell the Doctor/Time Turner that the Master's Son, The Maestro, has remembered, and that he is very, very pissed! And it's all thanks to the randomness of a certain chaos-battery of a mare, Pinkamena Diane Pie!
6517526 when I check, I do some serious checking. You sir/madam, are a liar, sitting behind a screen, and a curtain of lies you spun into a web persona. Also, Doctor Clockwork is not the same doctor you know.
6521638 How dare you call me a liar, you bitch! If I was in Equestria right now, I would whoop your flank and RYNO you!
6521664 but that's just the thing. You can't come to Equestria. I sealed any rifts big enough to get through, or have them safely contained. So I can guarantee you, or any other human, won't be here anytime in the future.