NOTE: THIS IS NOT A CLOPFIC.
After Rainbow Dash finishes setting the weather as she has been asked to do, she joins Fluttershy, who she haven't seen for 2 days. She finds her in the worst moment: The bunnies got crazy for a reason both mares ignore. Rainbow Dash decides to go help her friend to calm down the bunnies and find the reason to their excitement. As she does so, she finds some feelings deep inside her that she never knew before.
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I said I will do a FlutterDash story, well, here it is! This one is very short, I have been surprised myslef, I who normally do such long stories. Though I really like this one. It's adorable, cute, and got nothing in it that could actually affect a person.
It took me time to find a right picture for this! I took it from here: http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=FlutterDash&view=detail&id=9C5AD217CCC74E34E500463A992CE0A8263B235E&first=31&FORM=IDFRIR
I actually had a dream about this thing last night, and I couldn't hold the need to write it. I hope you guys like it as much as I liked- no, LOVED my dream! ^^
1,000 + words only?
Flutterdash?
Something about bunnies?
LOLNOPE.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
311339 How constructive!
Entire Flutterdash in 1,738 words
Involves bunny "Excitement"
I've read one clop bunny fetish (I regret it)
I will not be reading this.
311339 What the hell man? If you don't have something to say then shush.
Cute story, I really wish it wasn't so short. I hope to see a sequel.
>Rainbow Dash helps Fluttershy to calm her bunnies.
This is either the most cliche plot device or the best euphemism ever. I kid, I kid, Short, but it's a nice read. The ending line sounded weird coming from Dash, though.
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Im just playin, sheesh.
Although FLutterdash isn't my thing because
they are my least favorite ponies. And yes i
'said that with a straight face.
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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I AM MOST CONSTRUCTIVE MAN IN HISTORY OF WORLD !!
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
Awesome Story in my opinion wish it wouldn't be just this Chapter
Wish you'd write another one or continue this one in someway. D:
"I actually had a dream about this"
You had a dream...about ponies? Man, I'm jealous!
In this review I shall be speaking honestly to you about the quality of this piece. First, is this fanfic well written? No, in fact it's rifled with mistakes and problems to which I shall be listing. Second, did I enjoy the fanfic? Yes, even with its errors it was a nice story and at least shows hard work and effort being put into it.
Starting with what I liked about the fanfic, the story for starters. It's not the most original but at least neither of the characters ended up in hospital, and it was a good plot to use for a short story. It doesn't overstay its welcome and tells the plot in an enjoyable fashion. Humour, probably unintentional, is neat, and I in particular like how you approached the romance part of this story. It's light, charming, develops nicely despite being in such a short space of time, and witty. The progression of thoughts and the humorous denial of them, and actions, feel surprisingly fitting for Rainbow Dash, and the ending is just incredibly sweet.
Unfortunately, while concepts such as story, romance, humour, and characters went well the overall writing did not. Sentences often feel disjointed or disconnected from another, most notable in the opening paragraph, and there are many errors in regards to spelling and grammar. The wrong form of a word is occasionally used but the more common problem is the case of missing small words such as 'the' and 'as' or having them in places where they should not be. It's also not just the missing words but missing letters that end up either changing the meaning of the word or just making the word simply incorrect. Furthermore, despite being placed as a character tag for this fanfic, Angel Bunny had pretty much no involvement with the story and was only mentioned once...then he disappeared.
Although the writing is poor I did make note of the decent pacing and occasional spark in vocabulary or use of phrases that truly show a great amount of effort was put into this small piece. Even with its many faults I was still able to enjoy this short, simple, and sweet fanfic which managed to tell a tale of a budding romance magnificently. Great job, keep up the good work!
311608 Oh wow, I thank you. I thank you so much! It's THIS kind of comment I've been looking for!
Thank you for the compliment... I actually never noticed that it was funny until I read my story myself. It wasn't like that in my dream, though... I had to add a bit of Rainbow Dash flair in it, if you know what I mean.
And, I see. I read it again, and, you are actually right! I will try my best to make efforts in writing English... I am French, you see, and it's a bit difficult for me to place some words... And I'm sorry if some words have no sense, I sometimes use a translator, a very, very poor one. I will try to work on those, thank you for making me notice.
Thank you again!
311436 I know, but I thought it would be cute... And, Rainbow Dash has already been weird in many episodes, if you know what I mean. Sometimes I even feel like she has 15 different personalities in her head XD Well I made her a new one
311496 What, dreams about ponies?! I have them ALL THE TIME. It's actually from them that appear my fics.
311388 I know it really sounded like a clopfic! And I regret that it does! I actually wrote in the description that it had nothing bad to explain that's it's NOT what everypony thinks! I swear! It's just a little cute story I've made, and I guess somepony even told me it had some funny parts... Read it, you will understand that I am innocent.
311339 I know it really sounded like a clopfic! And I regret that it does! I actually wrote in the description that it had nothing bad to explain that's it's NOT what everypony thinks! I swear! It's just a little cute story I've made, and I guess somepony even told me it had some funny parts... Read it, you will understand that I am innocent...
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A sequel? Whoa, I wasn't expecting this
I actually don't have any ideas for one so I don't think that would be possible... I'm also busy cause I'm currently writing 2 more stories so I guess it would be long before I could do one 
Sorry do dissapoint you guys... Though you can still hope for more different stories from me though.
322964 And what does that... mean?
Good story. Short and sweet. Very short. Ending is sugestive as to where it might go.
