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Yeah i had to do it.
Good story by the way. I did like their bodies retained there cutie marks as well as there accents, only their minds had switched.
So awesome!
It's well written, and the characterization is great. Okay, it's short, but I don't think this needs to be any longer than it already is. All in all, it's a great story.
It was so short, but it doesn't need o be any longer. They kept their accents and such. The resolving of he problem was very simple, just as it should be. Far too many people over-compicate things. This was amazing and I'm glad to be following you, as usual
631649 I'm so glad it's well written
I wrote AND posted this on my iPod, and trust me, both of them aren't that easy
631400>>631649>>632113 Thank you so very much! I glad you liked my ideas
It's awkward at times, and there's really no actual plot, but it's an interesting concept. Perhaps expand on it a bit and re-release it in the future? Good work nonetheless
6 / 10
633293 Thank you for being Honest! (Wow, okay, really bad pun)
Which parts are awkward? Could you give me an example?
It wasn't really meant to have an actual 'plot'. Just a random story I came up with. Not my best, but still good. Was just trying things...
No, it's okay. It was meant to be very short. Still, thank you for suggesting
Well, that's a nice note. :)
633378 I can't really give you an example. I'm not even sure myself what the issue might be. Is English not your first language? Maybe I'm just being a tool...
All I can say is that when I was reading it, it was definitely not like anything I had read before. It had an extra "something", or perhaps lacked a certain "something"...
Okay, I'm getting way too philosophical with this
"casted?" otherwise... interesting story.
It's a very good story. Like silver, up there, said. There's something off, but I can't put my finger on it. So I'll just let it go!
And, WOW, you wrote this on you iPod? That's a feat! I hated typing on my iPod, and it's just as bad with my iPhone, so I know how hard it would of been to write this. AND THEN, you posted it from your iPod too! Now I don't know how hard it is to post a story from a computer, but I'm betting it's much, much, MUCH harder to do it from a 5(or so)X3(or so) inch screen.
Cool! I'm not the only one who types on their iPod. Funny how things work out that way.
634191 Oops. D:
634233 Trust me, you DON'T wanna know.
I was pretty hard not to have any program to help you in your typing (except for the damn iPod corrections that suck) but otherwise it wasn't that bad. It wasn't the first time I wrote a story on my iPod so.
909323 I thought I was the only one too :P