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Typo or sarcasm I can't detect?
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Sarc, i'll place it in itallics to make it stand out.
Haha. Fuzzy dice rock. Also you should get somebody on DeviantArt to draw the epic things in your stories. Easier to visualize what happens. Also it would just be really cool.
Good choices.
Have you been playing to much Mechwarrior?
Methinks someone has been watching Full Metal Alchemist....
Also,Is it wrong to think Nigel was about two tiers of Mech from squealing like a schoolgirl when he was told the mech was his to pilot?
High-Confessor Dietrich Von Schreiber is frigging amazing
This is now officially Warhammer 40k GRIMBRIGHT Edition now with no irrational hate on the Xenos and a considerably lower Zealotry, they even have Warlord Titans! ISA is their Adeptus Astartes/Iquisition mix, the priest guys are the Ecclesiarchy, and the regular Soldiers are the Imperial Guard/Navy.
Calling in his version of the exterminatus would be a very dark way to end the fic.
But ending a fic with an explosion of that magnitude would be awesome non the less.
I swear, I seriously thought he was going to say "Now. Who's up for ice-cream?" after he had talked to the noble.
Mi Gusta
I smell some Warhammer influences.
And you have good choices in music.
So the UIP are not!Imperium of Man?
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Well, when you look at the differences:
1.Their God is not the Emperor, in fact if you picked up on one of the soldier's name they have multiple faiths, however the Mortisum cult is the largest.
2.They embrace new technology instead of shunning it (also, they use some rather questionable methods that are yet to be revealed...)
3.They aren't xenophobic, sure they'll conquer you but it won't be because you're different.
4.Pre-space age culture is a lot more prevalent.
5.Their standard soldiers aren't nicely dressed sandbags.
6.I doubt the Imperium would tolerate a man such as Nigel in a command position. Well, maybe a Planetary Govener (They were alsways painted as insane corrupt sloths) but aside from that no.
7. I couldn't think of a reason seven. I guess they don't fight orks?
Anyway, with the UIP's background of invading other universes who's to say that in one possible future fic they can't encounter the IOM and then proceed to fight a crusade fleet for the rights to conquer Equestria?
does he or does he not like CHEESE!?
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Besides the Imperial Cult, there is also the Cult Mechanicus and Chaos Worship in the Imperium (just because the last one is illegal doesn't mean its not there).
Feudal and Feral worlds.
The IG spends most of its time suppressing rebellions. Considering how most rebels have access to only stub guns and flack armor is 100% bullet proof...
Also, UIP soldiers are vulnerable to crossbows and equipped with not!lasguns.
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What? Considering one took three to the chest without flinching I think that's a bit rich.
Do IOM military blast out Iron Maiden and quote 21st century pop-culture? I don't think so.
The UIP has a wide varitiy of faiths such as chrisiians, islam, the main cult and many more not introduced yet. All of there also support my point of the UIP being closer to their Terran heritage. These are wise-spread religons, you don't see the machine cult in the majrity of the imperial populace.
Also Lasguns are rubbish, hellguns aren't but the fact remains that the IOM IG is mainly a tide of mass-equipted soldiers who use wieght of numbers. You'll notice that the UIP troops utilise mainly pulse-lasers, pulse lasers have ten times the power of beam-based rifles. The IOM are tech stagnent, ruled by a corrupt religon (yes, they are very corrupt) that acts like the church during the dark ages. Imagine what IOm would be like if they embraced advanced technology?
Comparing the IOM to the UIP will not work out. Did I pull some elements from WH?
Yes, I did use it for some insperation but the way each Empire works is very different. The UIP would befriend then slowly absorb a worthy alien empire where the IOM would just declear a crusade on it and make themselves another enemy.
High-Confessor Dietrich Von Schreiber must pet more ponies...
... even better, if some convert to the faith because of said petting (some of those ponies will do anything for more belly rubs and ear scratches) and he ends up with his own pony "herd/flock/congregation"... who are completely faithful!
4000007
Sorry about that. I assumed that UIP infantry being slowed down by griffons with crossbows meant they are vulnerable to them. Rather stupid of me, considering there were no human casualties.
For a move vivid depiction of "Back in control"
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They didn't advance because of possible ambushs. They had three non-combatents with them who are certainly vunrable to crossbows and they were outnumbered, even an ill-equipted force can gain the upper hand during an ambush. Better to slowly whittle them down while waiting for support.
Fuzzy dice, oh man that's just perfect. Now I want some...and a mech.
Meh, I've seen better.
...but I've also seen worse. MUCH WORSE.
So I'd say 75/100, will continue reading. You have my support, good sir.
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PS.
...yeah...shut up people.
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Thanks, i'm pretty proud that my first fic did this well, guess all those years of reading novels paid off.
Apparently performing your duty for you.
4029652
Dunka sir,
As for the empire pitting, I believe that someone already suggested that (someone with a universe destroying OC i think). It could be interesting, however I must warn you that the UIP loves their underhand tactics.
Oh, and you know how they don't seem to suprised about magic?
One word: Necrotech.
4030016
Eh, if that's how you want to see it.
In truth Celestia and most of the guard would be shocked if they found out what was happening (not the interogation, I myself don't have any qualms with what the Captain did, the UIP would do far worse if they wanted infomation).
I think i've actually painted the ponies in a good light, after all in this fic who do you think is more evil?
If I remember correctly I wrote this chapter after reading a fic where the Equestrians were displayed as infallible moral beings who could do no evil. I guess I just wanted to show that not all of the guards were as perfect as some prefer to think. If you don't like it then that's fine, just keep in mind that i'm not trying to portray one side as good and the other as evil, because the humans in this fic sure aren't knights in shining armour.
Some pictures this fic made me think of.
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I want one!
I'll start with repelling an invasion, followed by a liberation, and for dessert I'll take a genocide of slavers please
4031952
After this chapter, that's it. These UIP jerks need to be spotlighted in a First Person Shooter game. These mechs and vehicles are just too badass.
6190419 Agreed.
Finally! I've been looking everywhere for a story that held even a simple mention of Sabaton! It's great to see another with at least some knowledge of them!
You have great taste in music mate.
Going off your name, and the fact that you put the letter "u" in words where they belong, one can assume you're a fellow Aussie?
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I believe it's the UK English that Australia is taught that adds the useless 'u' to words that don't really need them, but, let's agree to disagree with the proper spelling of words.
I'm enjoying this so far, but I've got a few questions.
1. Is this inspired by Warhammer 40k? Cus' I is starting to feel like it.
and 2. Is this related to you fic' 'Plan B'?
"All these words, words like 'evil' and 'vicious', they meant nothing to nature. Yes, evil was a human invention."
--Wolf Lord Eric Longtooth
Foxhounds, Fellreavers, im starting to feel that JUST maybe this is inspired by the Legio Titanicus from WH40K. Wouldnt be shocked to see an Battlelord (Warlord Titan) or Imperial (Imperator Titan) walkers later on.
3999820 There is also the 'Greater Good', Eldar Religion, the C'tan before they died out, Ork Religion, and thats about it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xnIBFAYtmQ0
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Those, other than kinda the Greater Good, aren't in the Imperium