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He watched Luna sleeping for hours and didn't hug her I would have broke after just 5 minutes
3606610 I know I would have not taken any chances and killed her
Quite a fun letter! But it needs some visual indication that it is actually written text.
This letter has made my day
Letter was just
Shitload of laugh
Especially with 6
And moment when Luna was mentioned.
Hahahaha *reads* awww
3606672 that's a terrible thing to say
3606905 thank u my nemeny
The letter was nice. It was only missing the imprint of lips somewhere on it.
ha now lunas ganna have nightmares about that letter oh the irony I LOVE IT
Its funny how completely thoughtless those guys act in this ,for everyone else but the humans, extremely serious situation of national importance.
They don't even stop to think about the impact they are having on this, in comparison to them, hilariously primitive world through their sheer presence.
This is a paid vacation for them, it's like that time i got send to this convention to "represent" the company i work for and ended up having a 3 days long party with everyone else involved because we only had to stand around a stall a few hours each day and the rest was downtime.
I get the feeling he wouldnt be able to kill Luna,Due to adorable......Likely same with foals
XD....I can't breathe XD
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Nah, he just knows that he's scarred her for life. It's much more fun that way.
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Oh, lel.
was I the only one who was pissed about that letter? you're going to gloat about a victory over a race that barely knows what technology is when you used synced remote explosives and chemical incendiaries? Bad form... also dick move.
HAHA! How dare you NOT have everything the way I'm used to. Also how dare you NOT be at the same power Militarily than the Intergalactic race based off off murder and war. HOW FUCKING DARE YOU CELESTIA!
Heres hoping that some elder god comes around to shit on the humans day, maybe knock them down a peg or two and banjax their day/tech/ateries.
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that's kind of his Character, i'll admit, he is a dick, an insane dick, possibly the biggest dick on the planet. But he's an interesting dick, a dick that people will read about and possibly the most fearsome dick that Celestia and Luna have every encountered. He's not all bad, he just... doesn;t know when to stop.
3616176 Random and interesting are two different things. So far he's random and a dick. You want interesting? Try a fight scene that isn't one sided.
not to say one sided fight scenes have no place in writing. But they need to be used as an establishment of power so the audience knows what the powerhouse is capable of. In your story that would be the attack on the hive. Also unless that rocket salvo was some kind of face melting MIRV. I don't think it'd kill 4000 soldiers. Even an entire salvo of standard hellfire ordinance will get 100 ft kill radius and I'm being very generous there. Also yes i get that they just ran away after that shock and awe starter but then the rest die on a bridge? wow. Musta been a 7 lane highway bridge.
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For a start, if you expect me to put a race of ponies who haven't seen war in 1000 years against a group of humans from a space-faring militaristc empire and have them come out even, it's not going to happen. The main difference is mindset. The ponies haven't encountered this method of warfare, they were completly un-prepared. They do not know what their enemy is capable of, they don't know just how far they will go and they don't know where they will strike next. As for the "face melting MIRV. I don't think it'd kill 4000 soldiers." thing it didn't. It was however loud, terrifying and would have scared the ponies and allies shiteless as they had not seen something like it before. Take the use of rockets in the 17th centuray for example. The rockets were unrilable, prone to pre-mature detonation and often did not cause too much damage. They were however a terror weapon, very effective at frighting the enemy.
As for the bomb on a bridge the bridge was across a large gap, therfore when the bomb destroyed it the survivours on the bridge would fall into the ravine. Also i did not say they all died, just the majority. As for the size, yes, it was a large bridge, however the bomb was also large. We have weapons that existed in the 70's that could level a huge area (I know the Daisy cutter and Fuel air bomb are air-dropped, but we are talking about guys who's guns fire small peices of anti-matter, a large bomb is not that far-fetched.)
I can understand that you may find an even match-up more interesting, and i admit that if the humans faced the ponies in open battle they would not win (20 versus 4000 for instance) so far they have not, they have used tactics un-seen before on the planet.
In my own opinion i don't think the ponies would stand a chance against modern military forces and equiptment, let alone a futeristic army. If you don't agree with the direction that this fic is going then by all means you can stop reading if you want to.
I don't mind that your questioning how i'm writing this fic, in fact i encourage it. I just don't see why i should make the fights more even.
3616286 I don't expect the ponies to be even with the humans. I'm just flabbergasted that the commander would rub salt in the wound like that.
Fuel air bombs and daisy cutters were massive explosives(some nearly 12 feet long) but that's not the point. Unless they scaled under the bridgework, planted the bomb and then scaled back up, they'd have to plant it at the bbase of the bridge supports which would mean even more explosives would be required to harm the bridge walkers. Either that or they planted 2 sets of remote explosives at each side, meaning more explosives are required because the bridge won't be dragged down by its weight as efficiently as a center detonation.
Also antimatter ammo is ridiculous. There's a reason explosive ammo isn't used today. containing explosives safely while preserving the potential energy release is difficult to do over long periods of time. Your antimatter ammo would have to create a vacuum keeping matter away from the antimatter, suspend the antimatter in a non-Newtonian force field, and be able to keep it in its relative place as the bullet rapidly accelerates towards its target(micro inertial dampeners). Not only this but just one gram of antimatter explodes with 43554 tons of force (FUN FACT: 1 ton of antimatter will explode with more force than every nuke in the world simultaneously). If a single bullet were to go off it would destabilize every other bullet in the clip, sublimate the gun it was in, kill the owner and send the rest of his team to the 4 corners of the earth. Then there's the reserve clip he was carrying, his squads antimatter ammo etc.
So for my own sanity's sake i just filtered out the antimatter ammo bit. the regular stuff is plenty, especially when you figure the guards are wearing gold and that shit can be formed by hand.
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I fell kind of cheap playing this card, but i'll do it anyway.
This is a peice of fiction.
If i want my characters to fire ammo containing antimatter then they're going to do it. If i want the Commander to be an insane Psycopath then he's going to be one. I want him to enter batlle dressed in his grandmother's sunday best wielding nothing but a parasol then it's going to happen.
I could write a fic where a group of US marines go into Equestria, make friends with the ponies and then all eat crumpets, but it's been done before. I think the reason that this fic has appealed to the majority of the readers is that it is over-the-top, the main character is un-realistic and the situations are incredibly one-sided.
I did not write this fic going for accuracy or realisum, i wrote it as it is fun to write it this way.
You can continue to comment about how this would never work in real life but the fact is that this is not real life, it is fiction after all.
3616374 Not gonna lie, that was the phrase i was looking for... don't know why. Maybe as an affirmation that this ain't serious?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4wY-FhBArw#t=38
anyways think I've given enough grief for the day. I'll give this a few more chapters, if it ain't bueno then i'll just stop reading.
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Truer words never spoken mate. I read this and enjoy because it makes me larf and it is a good break from those 'realistic' protagonists that are always angsting out and getting fucked over by ponies yet forgiving them like an abused girlfriend.
Sometimes it's fun to watch psychotic space marines enact disproportionate retribution so the damn ponies actually feel consequences for their actions.
"Realistic" pussywhipped bitchtit < Nigel M. Chalmers
Sad thing is I can't tell if he's joking... -_-
im enjoying the mayhem too much and i laughed my ass off at twilight crying in general . Does that make me a bad person?
3910760 no
Oh, oh wow.... I just can't stop laughing.
Doesn't he mean Griff
3616374 This shit is priceless! Keep it up bro!
Too. Damn. Funny.
-i watch you sleep in bed at night! It's not.. Creepy!- some annoying person
5593517 you just referenced to something awesome. Good job. Good job.
Her pathetic what?
And that's where I lost it
5906710 Stevens reminds me of the military's infamous Carl.
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I was thinking Grif from RVB
The Calming Pie needs more nutmeg.
I wonder if he tried pony meat.
Number 8 is the best!
The worst of them all.
he... ate a fucking griffon?
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Well, he ate a griffon. Pretty sure it wasn't doing the tango at the time.