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Great start, but that story pic (the one of the human skull with the third eye) made me almost not read it. I judge books by there cover. And this cover (picture) has absolutely nothing to do with the story, so far at least unless the humans have 3 eyes.
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Well, in the first chapter it discribes the icon on the device as a "Skull with a third eye imprinted on the forehead", so there is your relation there. The main reason that that is my cover art is that it is the symbol for the main human party involved in the story and, mostly, to be honest, i chose it because im a rubbish artist and i didn't want to use an image ripped directly from the internet.
Interesting. Keep up the good work!
A surprisingly polite way of saying STFU.
Double comma all the way!
Space between comma and word before it.
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Huh, thanks.
I've been meaning to go back and edit the hell out of this fic but i've found myself caught up with updates and what-not. Looking back on all of these grammar mistakes I find myself wondering just what i was thinking when I wrote it.
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Or watch your own back, because at this point I can't be bothered to...
I wonder if the window was even open.