When Applebloom returns to the class you call Apple Bloom a filly. A filly is a female young horse while a colt is a male young horse. Here is the sentence where it happened
“And, Ah… Apple Bloom, welcome back,” she continued, turning her awkward smile on the farm filly.
A little bit later Diamond Tiara says that Apple Bloom is a boy. Also this term is incorrect cause a young male human is called a boy while a young male horse is a colt.
“Apple Bloom. Is. A. BOY! Are we seriously just going to ignore that?!”
Now I further read this chapter I noticed that you always use boy instead of colt. And when I looked back to the other chapter I noticed the same. If it your preference you can let it stay...
5307672 "Boy" is a pretty generic and non-specific term for a male, it's not strictly and only for humans. "Man" and "woman" are the human-specific gender-identifiers that would be incorrect to use. I do use the pony-specific filly/colt and mare/stallion terms as well, but boy and girl are as generic terms as male and female, so I don't really have qualms about using them.
As for still referring to Apple Bloom as a girl/filly despite her transformation, this story is from Apple Bloom's perspective, and as is noted in this chapter, she still considers herself a female, so the female-specific pronouns remain.
Yeah sorry about that. There's actually another good 4-5k words written that I intended to all be part of this chapter, but it was dragging on so long I decided to break it up a bit. So hopefully the wait for the next chapter won't be nearly as long.
This is shaping up to be a very, very interesting story, and I was glad to see it updated again. I'm looking forward to seeing just how things develop between the crusaders, with Scootaloo wanting to get Sweetie Belle laid in an effort to help her out with her problem.
5307767 That's a bit of brilliance right now. What's said is generally said for a specific reason, not simply because it might be a typing error. It helps paint a picture of just what the setting is.
5307771 Oh hell I've had to do that many, many times with my own work. I know exactly what you're talking about.
You sir, have made my day. This is even better than when I heard LK was making new episodes! Now, what's the next most long-awaited story whose author I can complain about behind their back?
Hmm, looks like it's Winter's Child. DAMN YOU softy8088! That said, Bronywriter's taking his time as well with ASHO. DAMN THEM BOTH!
I take it more updates are a given? If not, be prepared to see one very sad commenter. You've been warned
Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom walk through the door to the Clubhouse. Sweetie Bell: "So..how....." Scootaloo: "WILL YOU TWO JUST FUCK ALL READY!!!!" Apple Bloom: "SCOOTS!!! What the hay!!!" Scootaloo: "What? Oh...right...sorry..." Scootaloo then proceeds to close and lock the clubhouse door. Scootaloo: "There we go. Now Spike won't walk in while you're rutting.
Scootaloo wants Sweetie to get in on the action. I smell a 3-way enhanced friendshipping lesson coming in.
I think we all know what Silver is suggesting to DT. She wants some D and Rumble is so hard gay it'd be impossible to quench the fires between those flanks. I don't know if this will go into a begrudging threesome or more like Silver gets some and DT gets denied, only for AB and DT to have like some awesome tussle again like they did at the start of the story that transforms into angry sex, let's hope for cute angry and confusing sex with AB questing why she's enjoying her bitter rival so much, that causes a lifetime worth of sexual confusing towards AB for DT.
Don't care how it happens, but I pray to thee, let there be *some* sort of DiamondBloom in this!
Sweetie is going to flood the clubhouse. I hope Scootaloo knows... never mind, after that last session between AB and Scoots, I'm pretty sure Scoots can handle CPR.
5311649 I dunno. It says back to back, which is two events happening close together. Which means two rounds, assuming a round is ended by a climax. Two + Scootaloo = 3. Yeah, there has got to be a joke in there somewhere, not sure.
But if it were three, than that'd mean round 4 is what it (the penis) is ready for
You're a cruel man, ending this before Sweetie Belle's problem is taken care of.
5307508
After such a long wait too. Hopefully more chapters will be out soon.
Warning, Warning, Target designated as Sweetie Belle´s threat level is rising exponentially XD
Seeing an update made me so happy.
Seeing an update made me so happy.
When Applebloom returns to the class you call Apple Bloom a filly. A filly is a female young horse while a colt is a male young horse. Here is the sentence where it happened
A little bit later Diamond Tiara says that Apple Bloom is a boy. Also this term is incorrect cause a young male human is called a boy while a young male horse is a colt.
Now I further read this chapter I noticed that you always use boy instead of colt. And when I looked back to the other chapter I noticed the same. If it your preference you can let it stay...
I have a feeling Discord is watching this from somewhere with a big popcorn tub.
Wow, it's like Adolesence, BUT EVEN BETTER!
man, AB better bone SS and DT by the end.
When I saw this updated, I fell outta my chair
Glad to see you back in the saddle as it were.
I looked over this so long ago I was beginning to wonder if you had decided not to post it after all; I'm quite glad to be wrong in this instance.
5307672
"Boy" is a pretty generic and non-specific term for a male, it's not strictly and only for humans. "Man" and "woman" are the human-specific gender-identifiers that would be incorrect to use. I do use the pony-specific filly/colt and mare/stallion terms as well, but boy and girl are as generic terms as male and female, so I don't really have qualms about using them.
As for still referring to Apple Bloom as a girl/filly despite her transformation, this story is from Apple Bloom's perspective, and as is noted in this chapter, she still considers herself a female, so the female-specific pronouns remain.
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5307508
Yeah sorry about that. There's actually another good 4-5k words written that I intended to all be part of this chapter, but it was dragging on so long I decided to break it up a bit. So hopefully the wait for the next chapter won't be nearly as long.
Didn't expect to see an update but I'm happy I did. I hope to see what happens sooner than later.
This is shaping up to be a very, very interesting story, and I was glad to see it updated again. I'm looking forward to seeing just how things develop between the crusaders, with Scootaloo wanting to get Sweetie Belle laid in an effort to help her out with her problem.
5307767
That's a bit of brilliance right now. What's said is generally said for a specific reason, not simply because it might be a typing error. It helps paint a picture of just what the setting is.
5307771
Oh hell I've had to do that many, many times with my own work. I know exactly what you're talking about.
5307704 This came before that story. So you meant to say Adolesence is like this, but this one is better.
5307981
Exactly. In that story, there was only Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. But in this one, there is more characters, which has more possible sex/shipping
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
You sir, have made my day. This is even better than when I heard LK was making new episodes! Now, what's the next most long-awaited story whose author I can complain about behind their back?
Hmm, looks like it's Winter's Child. DAMN YOU softy8088! That said, Bronywriter's taking his time as well with ASHO. DAMN THEM BOTH!
I take it more updates are a given? If not, be prepared to see one very sad commenter. You've been warned
Woot updates
It lives!
I'm glad to see this get updated.
5307722 Well I don't know about DT, but it sue looks like SS wouldn't mind a little fun time.
IT LIVES
awesome glad to see this hasn't died, much like appleblooms uh new addition
Welcome back!
Scootaloo, you evil mastermind...
Good
Wonderful to see this update again!
IT'S ALIVE!!
Shh, guys! Don't blink, but i think Diamond Tiara's the vill- *slap* voice of reason in this literature!
Now is it just me or is Spike's deadpan look on the cover tells me he's peeved at Apple Bloom's transfiguration? Foreshadowing much?
Discord has armed Apple Bloom with the best weapon to use on Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon
I'm sorry class Diamond and Spoon were transferred to the School for unwed fillies
I think we all know how the next chapter will go.
Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom walk through the door to the Clubhouse.
Sweetie Bell: "So..how....."
Scootaloo: "WILL YOU TWO JUST FUCK ALL READY!!!!"
Apple Bloom: "SCOOTS!!! What the hay!!!"
Scootaloo: "What? Oh...right...sorry..."
Scootaloo then proceeds to close and lock the clubhouse door.
Scootaloo: "There we go. Now Spike won't walk in while you're rutting.
Worth the wait even without the sexy-time part! Excited for more chapters!
5308072
I find your name/avatar combo deeply amusing.
Ah.
I remember my awkward teen class boners...
Oh, thank Celestia. Too many good clopfics die young. I'm glad to see this returning.
yay! this is still a thing!
Obvious Harem route - ever girl BUT Diamond Tiara.
So when dorles Rumble get mounted? And everypony bar Diamond Tiara.
I'm waiting for Rumble to get his
And Diamond Tiara
And Silver Spoon
5310828 Giggity
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Scootaloo wants Sweetie to get in on the action. I smell a 3-way enhanced friendshipping lesson coming in.
I think we all know what Silver is suggesting to DT. She wants some D and Rumble is so hard gay it'd be impossible to quench the fires between those flanks. I don't know if this will go into a begrudging threesome or more like Silver gets some and DT gets denied, only for AB and DT to have like some awesome tussle again like they did at the start of the story that transforms into angry sex, let's hope for cute angry and confusing sex with AB questing why she's enjoying her bitter rival so much, that causes a lifetime worth of sexual confusing towards AB for DT.
Don't care how it happens, but I pray to thee, let there be *some* sort of DiamondBloom in this!
Sweetie is going to flood the clubhouse. I hope Scootaloo knows... never mind, after that last session between AB and Scoots, I'm pretty sure Scoots can handle CPR.
I count the two back2backs as two separate rounds in my head, which brings me up to round four.
Also, I'm curious as to what is going on inside everyone's heads in that class now
5311548
that's some nice nonsense math you got there
5311649
I dunno. It says back to back, which is two events happening close together. Which means two rounds, assuming a round is ended by a climax. Two + Scootaloo = 3. Yeah, there has got to be a joke in there somewhere, not sure.
But if it were three, than that'd mean round 4 is what it (the penis) is ready for
Also 42. While we are talking numbers.
I love how organic... *coughsnickercoughcough* their reactions are and how in character they are. I look forward to seeing Sweetie painted pearl
I love this so much that it's KILLING me whenever I finish a chapter.
Carcino Geneticist is OP. Please nerf.
5307508 I 2nd that
This fic has been aged eleven months to perfection, fermented until its taste is piquant to the palette.
Let's hope the next chapter doesn't turn it to vinegar, eh?
But then again, with CG at the wheel, I feel my fears will be assuaged.
Carcino, what is it about you that leads me to being so pretentious in my comments?
5313661
Proper English encourages its own use?
5311548 Don't confuse me with your fancy mathematics.
5314540
Okay...I'll just leave this here
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