On Hiatus since March 25th, 2014. Expected to recommence within a few months.
Getting shipped off of old derelict carriers and rusty old ships wasn't exactly the most comforting place to be let into a new country known as Equestria.
Bob and Royce have been through the thick and thin when it came to tough situations in the world.
Unfortunately, the massive floods, civil riots and the infamous Black Plague have forced them out of Europonia and into a new country where they didn't even have proper registration papers to bring with them!
Watch as how these two guys end up taking control of the local law enforcement in Canterbury with an unbeknownst enemy creeping up behind their backsides.
And watch as how these two characters became stepping stones to the entire pony population that helped end the unprecedented war known as Equestria: Z, three years later.
This is part of the Equestria: Z universe I am creating here. All the pieces will come to fruition in time my bronies. In time!
My first time in doing a comedy thing here with bits of every other genre thrown into the pot.
I hope you enjoy and comment away.
*Note* This is tied with the upcoming Trilogy in Equestria: Z
The first one is already out: Equestria: Z: The story of Twilight Sparkle and the Pandemic: Pt. I
Comment away!
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Cool!
3447008
Hey if you read the story. Consider giving it another read because I refined the intro.
Thanks and all the best.
It's a bit... Like it... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!! I'll re-read it later. But I saw some things that irked me (mainly in the structure). I'll get you some more details at a later date.
For a comedy... I like it. But the horror/thriller/action is nowhere to be found. Either way I'm sure you're just saving it for later so I'll re-check it to specify the irks and I'll get back to you later.
uh... Lyra is a mint green unicorn who is characterized by the fandom as being obsessed with humans.
as you can see in the pic provided; lyra is the mint green pony on the left sitting like a human.
on the right sitting like a normal pony is the cyan pony i was picturing in my mind when reading your story.
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dat plot.
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Alrighty I'll change it.
Sooo, how was the plot?!!!
nice
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You really aren't supportive you know.
Please be specific dude.
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I'm going to call you by your name if you don't give me a conclusive feedback, right now bro.
the plot as it seems is progressing smoothly as far as i can tell.
like we figure out something fucked up happened ponyville worse than tequila tuesdays with bob and royce on shrooms and crystal meth, then before anymore relevant information can be uttered to my waiting eyes we see the absolute living shit get kicked out of this random baker who fuckes up any retaliation, then we see some weird ass clop tease, then part ways after the interrogation moment is gone.
sounds like a good chapter to me.
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Knowing you wrote that made it even more funny, man.
Thanks dude!