I'm not saying I'm essentially revoking this submission, but I'm saying I'me essentially revoking this submission. I'm leaving it out there in case I get some kind of masse request for me to continue. My work's still here, and I give you permission to continue it for me. (WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU WANT TO DO THAT?!) >.> The link to G-docs is in here, somewhere, and if you want to, I'll give you the link and permission to edit whatever you please. Sorry to those watching me... but. Yeah.
It isn't really about sex now. Nor will it ever be. WIll both of those things be mentioned multiple times over the course of the story? Yes.
But I digress: Bebop is a blue pony.
Big whoop.
He apparently has a fan club of one.
Woo-hoo.
However, for this one daring, handsome, articulate fellow, his world is about to get a little bit... cooler. Has his whole stable ripped to shreds while he's in an unconscious stupor, 'dig?' This happenin' stallion of a pony has to do what he's told to do 'cause he figures "why the hell not?" He starts to like his life up there with his companion and trusty energy pistol. Maybe he gets into some mischief and blows shit up. Maybe he gets kicked in the groin and learns how to use power armour.
Maybe not.
This is the quaint li'l story of Bebop n' Company. Their tale. From their perspective, THEY are the big dogs of the Equestrian Wasteland. They can be pretentious bastards if they want to be.
Hey, it's a hell hound's life.
Yet another fallout story. No offense or anything, just making an observation.
537658v No problem at all. I see a lot of people writing these, and it bothers me that none of them go through with it. I've read a grand total of four (4) that are any good and have kept going and are still going. I plan on being one of them. Hope it goes well. (Not to sound rude or... well, as the intro says, "pretentious.")
Hey more FoE join us at the contemplation doc no one is on atm but we normally are we can be there to help and what not.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KaoFWVlFlMjYR2KmTWxwCYnvTZQcjEULO9YHSaqqk9U/edit?hl=en_GB&pli=1#heading=h.dpqxwtff6zty
Looking forward to seeing you there.
You know what? I'm tired of thumbing down FoEs just because they exist. Imma go ahead and give this a try
This my friend is very good so far.
537722 I have no idea what I'm supposed to do on there, sorry.
so far so good, you seem to have the good stuff/bad sh*t ratio pretty good so far
540644 The best way to find out is ask lol. We are a group of FoE writers/editors. You can come onto the dock just to talk. We also get published on EqD so its a good way to get out there. We are mainly there to help and to BS you know have fun.
581624 That will be explained and handled coming up pretty soon, glad you caught that! I wasn't sure if I quite had that down. Keep checkin' back every now and again for updates. Chapter 3 is very nearly finished on G-Docs, and I'll have it uploaded as soon as it's done.
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You wouldn't believe how annoyed at my computer I am right now.
I wrote everything down in a notebook- 20 pages worth of stuff, but I'm incredibly lazy...
good a new chapter could of been longer to be honest but still good
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Oh, don't worry, the latest one isn't even close to being finished. I've got the other pages written down by hand around here, somewhere, I just haven't gotten around to adding it yet. :P
could use some editing on the grammar front, but otherwise not bad
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I stick things in as I go along and don't pay much attention to grammar until I'm completely finished with a chapter.
Was there anything you have in mind that I didn't get? What chapter/what was the context?
If it was in the latest of them, then those'll be fixed up in no time. :3
so now he is blind?
just dandy aint it
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Well, 'next to.' xD
I'll letchoo in on a secret.
I'mma opt out o' writing chapters and turn it into a long series of thoughts.
"Abstract" will work better for my schedule and for my message. (Don't I sound like an artistic douchebag?)