Hey yo guys hit me up on what you think of the story cuz it's been a while lol
Watch as the Mane Six struggle to deal with the biggest bunch of jerks, whiners, push-overs, compassionate, heartfelt, selfish, selfless, murderers, kind, sincere, honest, colorful, mute, dissonance, creepy, psychotic, the strange and most deranged Humans, Aliens, Robots of their lives! With plans to escape, they all must work together and hope to try and understand how they are trapped on a planet!
Note: Lots of Comedy moments, and typical Slice Of Life bits. Oh, and characters from all those TV shows or real life people will be on this story.
References/Characters from Trailer Park Boys, Red Vs. Blue, That 70's Show, MLP (Of course), Blue Heelers, Family Guy, South Park, All Saints, Boondocks, Metallica, Swans, Bioshock: Infinite, Bioshock (Original), Wonderland (Australian show), Pantera, Mass Effect (1-3), Mrs. Brown's Boys, The Sopranos, Alice In Chains, Grand Theft Auto IV-V, Predator, Avatar, The Dark Knight, Machine Head and Under The Dome, Wentworth, Futurama, RWBY, Halo series, Inception, Green Mile, Gun's N Roses, Red Hot Chili Peppers, Iron Man, Lady Gaga, Nicki Minaj, Justin Bieber, SLiDE, Hermann Nitsch, Jarboe, Jeffery Dahmer, Left 4 Dead series, Borderlands 2, Gears Of War series, Nirvana, Godspeed You! The Black Emperor..., Jeff Dunham and finally, Archer.
Possibly more shows, bands, movies, animated shows, infamous people are to be expected at a later date.
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I know, man! They're the greatest!
have you tried yogscast
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Just seen it, I'm not sure I would go for it.
good point have you seen a show call m.a.s.h or creature hub or angry joe
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Angry Joe, yes! But only mentioned, I never actually seen it. And the other one, no. But M.A.S.H, hell-yeah!
your right m.a.s.h is a good one an could work in this story and i like red vs blue
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Yeah, it seems that it could work, also. I didn't mind the show, and I did say I would add more details of other shows, media stuff, etc. But, I think the people on this site don't quite get the concept I was trying to convey here. What do you think? I'm only stating it because well some people don't seem to like it, and many others don't really understand the fic.
Red Vs. Blue was my main inspiration for this concept.
sometimes people cannot think sometime fun to figure out how a story can be great
I'm not sure about this story... On one hand, there's the Dark Knight. On the other hand, there's Bieber. That, and it seems like there are WAY to many characters. This is either going to turn out to be really long, with multiple well-developed characters, or short, with characters seeming very shallow, and you relying on reader knowledge of the many, many shows and bands.
What I read so far was... underwhelming. You introduce characters by name, and then have them introduce themselves to each other later. 'Twilight Sparkle', while the unicorn's full name, does not need to be fully written out in narration; you can just use 'Twilight'. 'people/ponies/aliens/robots' should be written as such: people, ponies, aliens, and robots (the last comma is optional, however).
I will reserve judgement until later chapters come out. Please explain, though, how comedy and tragedy go together. They are, by definition, polar opposites. Here.
Tragedy: a play dealing with tragic events and having an unhappy ending, especially one concerning the downfall of the main character.
Comedy: a play characterized by its humorous or satirical tone and its depiction of amusing people or incidents, in which the characters ultimately triumph over adversity.
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Yeah, the plan is too make it real long. But also, the plan is to kill lots of them off, either in the most original or unoriginal fashion.
The main point of this story is, just for me to make a story about Characters I knew from the show that I have watched and decided to mix Drama with Comedy shows, Comedy with Thriller, all the like.
The main ideal point I can suggest is that this story is subtle to me, and well, that counts for the most part. Glad you seem invested though. I mean, I never intended for people to truly understand this story, like I'm sure you're in right now. But all of it ties to the ending I already have planned. Just the matter of what comes in the middle, and while they're are a lot of characters. Remember it says 'References' also. Indicating that some will appear while others will appear by just off the cuff mentions.
The real point of the story is too ensure that it's funny like Trailer Park Boys, serious like Blue Heelers, satirical like Red vs. Blue and dark like certain other TV shows.
It's well...random...with an understandable plot once you read enough (I.e. I need more chapters to be developed.)
As for Comedy and Tragedy, I read Othello by Shakespeare. And thanks to the knowledge of my English teacher, I knew quite a bit about Comedy and Tragedy.
The real part though, for me, is that, and challenge to note, that how can I sync them perfectly without sounding too contrived or too ridiculous.
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So it's a spoof.
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More or less. But I refuse to give it a title, because that creates expectations that I rather not fulfill unless its something I'm interested in.
going to try a poetry :are heroes or the villains or good or evil or both is question you
should we know or do we not: in a simpler version do you decided or do you let
someone else help in a way
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Well, yeah, both bad and good will be tested to overcome a series of trials and errors. And it's a real bunch, and I think some people don't quite realize that "characters" from the media-portrayed stuff will appear on here. Not all of them, but a few. Though, it'd be real funny and badass to see RWBY rose either fighting with or siding with the Red vs. Blue people.
New chapter out at the end of the week!
Lol this is funny please continue this