As Fluttershy enters Sugar Cube Corner, she notices something very wrong. But so does the narrator. Can he make it through the rest of the story, or will he rage quit this job?
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Therealdraginslayer
This is the land technicolor ponies that are not canon. Yes...this is the Land of the Brony with an OC
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Reminded me of The Stanley Parable
SIR!, THIS IS A TRAVESTY AGAINST ALL FORMS OF WRITHING!!! EVEN THE TYPES THAT ARNT INVOLVED!! AND IT"S HILAROUS!
[If you can't tell I mispelled stuff on purpose XD but honestly, I only read this out of morbid curiosity of where the funny might go XD]
I just dunno what to say... it... was hilarious. would love to see more stories like this... with a narrator messing with the story.
LOL, why haven't I read this before. it was hilarious.
I.Just.Can't.Stop.Laugh!
when Fluttershy bite the bullet, but still.... 
Yet I was like