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tursi


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After Luna's defeat as Nightmare Moon, Princess Celestia is left alone to raise the night sky. She stands on the balcony, caught off guard by her loneliness and despair. She goes through the motions, all the while questioning her actions and trying to defend them, not only to Luna, but to herself.

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Comments ( 9 )

Okay, wow. Only 8 views, huh. Deserves much more. :twilightsmile:

I enjoy this, thank you! :twilightsmile:

Many of your ellipses are missing the third dot. That said, you capture quite a lot of emotion in a very small space. I know the compliment comes about eighteen months too late, but I really like this. Thanks for writing.

5795313 Huh, so they are! Bad habit I picked up many years ago. I'll fix that (and in my other story. And maybe everything else I've written, or at least I'll check if it's a persistent habit! ;) ). Thanks for your kind words, saw the review too.

Oh, heh... You saw the review, huh? Well, what can I say, I liked the story. :pinkiehappy: I've no idea if anyone else will read it, but I hope so.

:( such a sad moment, excellently written there.

6201303 Thank you!

Strange how that one fact of banishment from the very first episode still resonates so strongly in this fandom. Yet I don't tire of seeing it tone well. You've written a nice, elegant glimpse into that ultimate of sad moments here. Nice job!

6307008 Thank you! That was the story that brought me into the fandom full on, and the more I learn about it, the more feels I get for it. It's a simple story but it reaches so deep. This was just my little attempt to explore it. :)

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