BEN did drown. But what did he drown in?
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Who would dislike this?! You certainly tried your best so your story just received one like
New chapter soon?
I don't have time now...I'll read dis tonight.
So, when do they find out what he did to poor Jadusable? And his true, eeevil nature...
PFFFFFFFF....
HAHAHhhahahahaahhaaHAHAHAHHAHAHHA
3398118 Only Trollestia will tell.
<Bananas!)
Told ya.
I don't think I'll mention Jadusable, but I don' friggin know.
By the way guys, if you got any ideas for more stories, let me know. I'm not very good with ideas and stuff like that.
P.S. I watched Don Hertzfeldt's REJECTED, so now I'm not going to sleep tonight.
In all that is holy...
MY ANUS IS BLEEDING!!!!!!!!!!
Mah spoon is too big.
Mah spoon is too big.
Mah spoon is too big.
...
I AM A BANANA.
I'm feeling fat, and sassy.
God, this thing is so old.
Good thing I had it restored. All the memories...
I was intrigued by this.
4628730 Oh no.
While I like the story, it's totally unlike "BEN" to surrender as quickly as he does in this story. And why would Pinkie knowingly mess with a dead body without even the slightest bit of respect for the dead?
And this is the point at which I stop reading. It's a clever enough idea, that I'd like to see done seriously, but the plot comes off as very immature. I mean, dancing to Thriller?
I love the idea, though. You seem to be a pretty smart kid, judging by your english. In a few years, I'd like to see you come back and take another stab at this story. Perhaps done as a scary story, or perhaps still as a comedy. I'd be happy to bt the editor, if you need one.
Both you and the story have potential. I'll keep this in my favorites box, so I'll know if you post any updates.
4766190 The thing is, I'm done working with it.
If you have read my blog, I'm giving this story away as a prize.
Thanks, anyways.
I think my mind needed this, because all it is now is a mush of 'Mindfuck', and I absolutely loved it. Kinda wish there was more, but meh. Good fun while it lasted!
it's a good story, too bad it died