• Member Since 18th Oct, 2013
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TotallyNotRainbowDash


A totally normal, but awesome, human person.

Comments ( 14 )

The awesomeness continues! These stories are great, mate!

All I could see was an incoming :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::ajsmug: threesome. PROCEED.

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Thanks! I really, really like writing them.

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I have other stories I have to write first, but I'm definitely thinking of one like that. A lot. Because AJ and Twilight would totally be into it, and they'd be really amazed at the things Rainbow can do to two mares at the same time.

I hope you'll read it when I write it down!

I don't know why but I feel like I know who wrote this, you ever feel like that? I don't know, maybe I'm crazy :rainbowhuh:

Anyway, this was an amazing story! But I don't know if I like Rainbow having Twi and Aj at the same time... she could easily get a few more ponies to sex with them! I mean in all honesty, who WOULDN'T want to sex RD? :rainbowdetermined2:

I am curious if the rest of her friends will appear. Great story, I'm curious to see where this goes from here. :rainbowkiss:

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Maybe you read my other fic? It's kind of the same style, and you might have forgotten it was by me.

I'm glad you liked the story! Rainbow could totally have sex with more than two mares, but it would probably be hard for her to get them all off at the same time if she had too many, so some of them would have to wait while she took care of the rest. It would probably be sexier if she had them two or three at a time.

But I am gonna write a fic about all of her friends one at a time, because she'd totally want to give all of them a special time like I wrote her giving Twilight and AJ.

This is horribly written... BUT! The appeal it has is that it looks as if Rainbow Dash herself wrote it. Which somehow makes it good in its own strange way. Conglaturation.

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Yeah, i couldn't even finish it *shudder*

That was definitely an interesting read. I dont think ive read a story quite like this before.

Not sure what to say... There was some detail missing and it was a little too quick... Take some pointers from this: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/138929/take-your-clothes-off

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it. But I wrote it, not Rainbow Dash.

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I know! I'm totally that good. It's hard, being such a genius, but I'm just glad I can share it with other people.

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I'll check it out! Even though I'm really good at this, I'm always trying to get better. That's just the kind of person I am.

I like how you took time to set the scene and build up to the hot stuff because some people can't handle getting to the point as quickly as Rainbow Dash, so that paced the story better for the slow-burn folks. This was so totally hot.

I think that ton of cider Rainbow accepted from the generous AJ should be delivered from AJ's coat one barrel at a time as that's the coolest way to serve cider. Maybe Twilight could help soaking AJ with the cider because she's a careful pony and won't waste any of it.

Can't wait for more stories, especially :ajsmug: :rainbowkiss: :twilightsmile:!

Honestly, I've no idea how to rate this. It's horribly written with an over-simplistic "plot". But it's still fun to read, and easy to read. It's so bad it's good, and I actually liked it. Thumbs up for enjoyment.

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