What's this? A chapter without sex? Geez, you're not sick, are you, TAW?
Actually, I like it much better without. And it's still incomplete! It'll be a sad day for me when this story ends. And one element I predicted a few chapters back still hasn't happened. Guess I was wrong then.
Amazing stuff as always, TAW. The planning that I imagine must go into each chapter is only matched by its execution.
Looking forward to seeing how the rest of their life together - or not-so-together - pans out. Preferably the former; I really am a sucker for a happy ending with this sort of story.
"That pony is always in such a rush! She should take things slow, like us—right Gummy?"
I laughed so hard.
Hmm... and I really would like to see a picture of RD with lab coat and goggles. One more thing. The d'aww is killing me. TAW, why do you write clop when you can write stuff like this?
696564 People like it, and back when I started there wasn't enough of the type of clop I was looking for. I'm slowly adding more SFW things, though. Heck, I'll probably go through and make a SFW version of WBHW once it's all over and done with.
696741 Well, if I didn't agree with you I wouldn't be here, would I? Clop is okay, I just think stories like this could do with less (especially in the earlier chapters)
FINALLY AN UPDATE Shorter than most, but hey I'll take it *After having read it* Yes. Yes. Yes and yes. I don't know what else to say, TAW, from someone who continuously talks themselves down, you are amazing. The only issue I have with this story is that it doesn't update more often.
699611 Every two weeks is a balance that lets me write other things in-between, hopefully keeping more people happy. This chapter was heavily delayed because real life stuff, hopefully the next one will be quicker (and longer--events will occur!)
695100 Fuckin' proposing to the same sex is gay as hell... I don't like it... but after marriage... I find it quite cute... even though I don't like gay... therefore, fuck this gay earth, and fuck me.
I had a comment like 13 weeks ago and I said that this story was "really good, if ya know what I mean *nudge nudge*"
I got a boner the likes of which none has ever seen.
This story is so good! I skip all the more intimate parts, but the overall story, romance and interaction between the characters is amazing! I'm usually not much of a RainbowxTwilight person (Appledash is my favorite ship) but you just moved Twidash into second place. Anywho, awesome writing, you make this pairing so damn cute! Also, the "Fly, you foal!" reference back however many chapters ago made me bust out laughing
I very much admire the way you manage to consistently mix sex, sappy romance, humor, and keep it all cohesive and fairly true to character for all the characters you use. Like others I look forward to the next chapter whenever it happens, because sometimes some things are worth the wait.
you know me TAW I support anything you do, because it is always awesome! honestly your fics are amazing, the NSFW ones and the SFW ones. I just can't get enough of your amazing writing. that being said, I almost Jumped for joy and shouted at 12:56 in the morning whilst wearing only my undergarments in a house full of sleeping people when I saw the next update was up for this story. the point of that story was to say you keep me waiting...alot. I love it
There is not enough win on the planet earth to tell you how much you just won everything. I would say internet but that would be rude to you. I have never read something this good. You sir are the first person i set to watch and I find it hard to think of anyone else that would better deserve it. Now I will go shed many manly tears that until this day has only been shed when my uncle died 5 years ago.
Please PLEASE for the love of all that is holy do not stop making more chapters for this story, I BEG YOU. This is literally THE best story I have EVER read, I would be devastated if you stopped producing more chapters. And I love this story so much I made an account just so I could tell you this. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please PLEASE don't stop making more chapters. Please....
(I wrote this thinking this was the final chapter) Oh wow, this was such an awesome story. Brilliantly written, no grammar/spelling mistakes that distracted me from the story, clop not just for the sake of clop but appropriate in the context, romance (yeah idk, I just like that in basically everything I read) and last but not least, that proposal at the end. The only other story I read that had that was Allegrezza, and both times I started to feel funny when I could see it coming, and when it actually happened I cried. Speaking of Allegrezza, this story is quite comparable to it. After reading that, I thought I'd never read something like that again. I was wrong. And for the record, I REALLY liked that one, so if I say I like this one as much it's certainly a compliment. Perhaps I was just too immerged in the story to see the flaws of it, but then that's hardly a bad thing either
Damn, when did I become such a wuss? I guess it's just because firstly, seeing the show already gives kind of a bond with the characters, and secondly, if something is written so brilliantly, you can't help but feel what the characters feel - I guess I felt both Dashies nervousness and her happiness.
(after realising it wasn't the last chapter) OH SWEET CELESTIA YES! Uhh, umm, well, yeah. awesome I can't wait to read the next part.
Anyways, job well done so far. I'm sorry I can't criticize you and give you points to work on, because this was just awesome. I wish there were more fics of the same quality, or even close to it.
Oh no, wait, there is this one thing: if, like you said in the comments of a previous chapter, you write the clop early in the chapter to get over with it so you can focus on the story itself, don't hesitate to leave it out completely. If you, as the writer, feel like the story is more important at the time, then don't feel forced to put clop in every single chapter - the perfect opportunity wil most likely happen eventually anyways. I honestly just speedread through some scenes in the later chapters because they felt kinda forced in. Having said that, I still think this is quality other writers can only dream of.
726310 oh, wow, that's awesome to hear--thank you! <3
And yeah, this last chapter didn't even have any sex, because... it just didn't fit anywhere. At its core, this is a romance story with sex, not a sex story with romance, so I don't much mind dropping it.
This gay earth.... fuck it. RAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE!!!!!!! In all seriousness, I mean it seriously, fuck this gay earth.
"This is fun!"
Twilight is sooooooooo cute!
EDIT: Man, you sure know how to make me enjoy a story. I was so sad when the chapter ended.
Couldn't you just make a huge ass über update with like 2-3 chapters so I can stay up a whole night reading your fic?
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What?
This chapter gave me diabetesssssss. HNG.
Also, HAHA @ "Yay!" Pinkie exclaimed. "Now kiss!"
This fic is one of the few that makes me smile all the way through, seriously. MFW reading this chapter , the whole time.
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I *could*, but then you'd have to wait three times as long!
Love every minute of it.
Sweet Harmony, I need a way to upvote this like, twelve more times.
Like, favourite... garrrrrrrr, why dont have more way to say THATS IS AWESOME! PERIOD
That was super awesome, and relay sweet, I like the bit when Dash wrote she dais yes.
Id the glider their first wedding gift?
What's this? A chapter without sex? Geez, you're not sick, are you, TAW?
Actually, I like it much better without. And it's still incomplete! It'll be a sad day for me when this story ends. And one element I predicted a few chapters back still hasn't happened. Guess I was wrong then.
The tears of happy. I have the tears of happy pone.
This is turn away from a clopfic, into a shipfic.... and I am totally fine with that.
It's great TAW please keep it up
Well TAW I'm pretty sure you won an internet for this chapter...
Amazing stuff as always, TAW. The planning that I imagine must go into each chapter is only matched by its execution.
Looking forward to seeing how the rest of their life together - or not-so-together - pans out. Preferably the former; I really am a sucker for a happy ending with this sort of story.
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d'aww
I'm glad I can help fill your insatiable need for TwiDash! And I love art, art is my favourite.
>tfw you can't get off Mr. Pones Wild Ride.
TAW stop making my heart explode.
twitrash
Yay Pinkie did a meme!
Moreover yay a wedding coming up! I love this story.
"That pony is always in such a rush! She should take things slow, like us—right Gummy?"
I laughed so hard.
Hmm... and I really would like to see a picture of RD with lab coat and goggles.
One more thing. The d'aww is killing me. TAW, why do you write clop when you can write stuff like this?
To quote a pony that I find myself very fond of...
That. was so... AWESOME! (and cute, and funny, and *rambles on random adjectives of a complimentary manner*)
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People like it, and back when I started there wasn't enough of the type of clop I was looking for. I'm slowly adding more SFW things, though. Heck, I'll probably go through and make a SFW version of WBHW once it's all over and done with.
696741
Well, if I didn't agree with you I wouldn't be here, would I? Clop is okay, I just think stories like this could do with less (especially in the earlier chapters)
FUCKING SICK
I wish I could hug this. I tried; my laptop is not cuddly.
You made me wibble.
my reaction when dash proposed
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My heart exploded... twice. When she said yes, I was just-
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And this, is one of the uncountable reasons why Twidash is, and always will be, my favorite ship.
Me at the marry me part.
Instantly replaced with Squee!
Meet the wedding planner.
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the hardest part of wedding photography is getting all the guests to scrunch at the same time
FINALLY AN UPDATE
Shorter than most, but hey I'll take it
*After having read it*
Yes.
Yes.
Yes and yes.
I don't know what else to say, TAW, from someone who continuously talks themselves down, you are amazing.
The only issue I have with this story is that it doesn't update more often.
699611
Every two weeks is a balance that lets me write other things in-between, hopefully keeping more people happy. This chapter was heavily delayed because real life stuff, hopefully the next one will be quicker (and longer--events will occur!)
695100 Fuckin' proposing to the same sex is gay as hell... I don't like it... but after marriage... I find it quite cute... even though I don't like gay...
therefore, fuck this gay earth, and fuck me.
I had a comment like 13 weeks ago and I said that this story was "really good, if ya know what I mean *nudge nudge*"
I got a boner the likes of which none has ever seen.
699828
...yes, yes it is.
This story is so good! I skip all the more intimate parts, but the overall story, romance and interaction between the characters is amazing! I'm usually not much of a RainbowxTwilight person (Appledash is my favorite ship) but you just moved Twidash into second place. Anywho, awesome writing, you make this pairing so damn cute! Also, the "Fly, you foal!" reference back however many chapters ago made me bust out laughing
Such a wonderful chapter. It's made of happiness and awesome. Love it so much. <3
I very much admire the way you manage to consistently mix sex, sappy romance, humor, and keep it all cohesive and fairly true to character for all the characters you use. Like others I look forward to the next chapter whenever it happens, because sometimes some things are worth the wait.
also:
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you know me TAW I support anything you do, because it is always awesome! honestly your fics are amazing, the NSFW ones and the SFW ones. I just can't get enough of your amazing writing. that being said, I almost Jumped for joy and shouted at 12:56 in the morning whilst wearing only my undergarments in a house full of sleeping people when I saw the next update was up for this story. the point of that story was to say you keep me waiting...alot. I love it
There is not enough win on the planet earth to tell you how much you just won everything. I would say internet but that would be rude to you. I have never read something this good. You sir are the first person i set to watch and I find it hard to think of anyone else that would better deserve it. Now I will go shed many manly tears that until this day has only been shed when my uncle died 5 years ago.
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So much Win! I must Draw something For you XD
Please PLEASE for the love of all that is holy do not stop making more chapters for this story, I BEG YOU. This is literally THE best story I have EVER read, I would be devastated if you stopped producing more chapters. And I love this story so much I made an account just so I could tell you this. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please PLEASE don't stop making more chapters. Please....
Now not only for the clop sections, but for the romance the love in the story..
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Don't worry, it's not going anywhere :)
This is how I feel about what you just said
Lol I'm such a wierdo..
(I wrote this thinking this was the final chapter)
Oh wow, this was such an awesome story. Brilliantly written, no grammar/spelling mistakes that distracted me from the story, clop not just for the sake of clop but appropriate in the context, romance (yeah idk, I just like that in basically everything I read) and last but not least, that proposal at the end.
The only other story I read that had that was Allegrezza, and both times I started to feel funny when I could see it coming, and when it actually happened I cried.
Speaking of Allegrezza, this story is quite comparable to it. After reading that, I thought I'd never read something like that again. I was wrong. And for the record, I REALLY liked that one, so if I say I like this one as much it's certainly a compliment.
Perhaps I was just too immerged in the story to see the flaws of it, but then that's hardly a bad thing either
Damn, when did I become such a wuss? I guess it's just because firstly, seeing the show already gives kind of a bond with the characters, and secondly, if something is written so brilliantly, you can't help but feel what the characters feel - I guess I felt both Dashies nervousness and her happiness.
(after realising it wasn't the last chapter)
OH SWEET CELESTIA YES!
Uhh, umm, well, yeah. awesome I can't wait to read the next part.
Anyways, job well done so far. I'm sorry I can't criticize you and give you points to work on, because this was just awesome. I wish there were more fics of the same quality, or even close to it.
Oh no, wait, there is this one thing: if, like you said in the comments of a previous chapter, you write the clop early in the chapter to get over with it so you can focus on the story itself, don't hesitate to leave it out completely. If you, as the writer, feel like the story is more important at the time, then don't feel forced to put clop in every single chapter - the perfect opportunity wil most likely happen eventually anyways. I honestly just speedread through some scenes in the later chapters because they felt kinda forced in.
Having said that, I still think this is quality other writers can only dream of.
726310
oh, wow, that's awesome to hear--thank you! <3
And yeah, this last chapter didn't even have any sex, because... it just didn't fit anywhere. At its core, this is a romance story with sex, not a sex story with romance, so I don't much mind dropping it.
Dropping the sex? That's fine as long as it doesn't spell disaster (Divorce)